Where in Jungkook has immense power, causing him to kill innocent lives every day. The only way to stop the sacrifices is to submit himself and his powers to his mate. He has to choose between power/pride and love.
A heartbreaking werewolf AU played by LisKook : UPDATES EVERY TUESDAY AND FRIDAY!
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Submit to Me by olusmg4K Reads, 434 Votes, 17 Parts
Title: 4/5 The title goes well with the story even though it is not very original.
Cover: 5/5 The cover is very nice. I like how the color of the letters matches the overall color.
Description: 6/10 I like the description and how you expanded on it in the chapter called Trailer, but the 'wherein' line is overused. You should word it differently by explaining that he kills to increase his power. What you said is the opposite. His power causes him to kill.
Plot: 18/20 I liked how you explained the book as if the characters were being interviewed. That was an imaginative way to introduce the background of the story. I love supernatural books and yours is a really good one. I believe what keeps the story interesting isn't the fact that they are werewolves but instead the dynamic between the characters. You did very well displaying their feelings and thoughts and the slow burn, love/hate relationship is critical in this story.
Writing Style: 8/10 Your writing style is enjoyable but sometimes you over explain things.
Diction: 8/10 You have a good vocabulary, so the little mistakes with words such as 'here' when you mean 'her', I believe are just typos.
Dialogue: 8/10 The dialogue is entertaining but it is sometimes hard to tell who is speaking.
Basic Grammar: 8/10 Some minor mistakes and some run-on sentences.
Aesthetic: 10/10 I liked that you used headers to indicate the change in pov. Changes in pov are inevitable when writing in the first person, and the way you handled it was very creative.
Originality and Appeal: 8/10 All in all, I think your book is very imaginative and an enjoyable read. In my personal opinion, I think the fact that the mc has to kill so many every day is a bit exaggerated. I do love adventure stories like this because you never know what is going to happen. I hope the ending is equally exciting. I really enjoyed the way you described everything.
