Prologue:
-Peacemaker is a lot more startled and confused about Darkstalker's appearance.
-Changed Drawing:
Chapter 1: Aftermath
-A little more detail was added as a mention of the setting and Peacemaker's weird observations of others' behaviors.
-Mention a little bit of Rainwing culture as well as a burial ground/memorial for tragic losses in the central part of the Rain Village.
Chapter 2: One After Another
-A little introduction with the idea of Rainwings watching him and Masking Thoughts being displayed (...)
-Peacemaker doesn't cry during the memory, he's silent.
-In the rainforest, there are trees described as so big that the branches could allow dragonets to sleep and sit comfortably without falling off.
-No strawberry picking is shown
-Memory moments are given a bit more context and description.
-Qibli shows a bit extra care with physical action as well.
Chapter 3: The News
-More corrections and added details/hints for later reveals(they already occurred).
-Characters being described a little more.
-Peacemaker is a bit more conflicted in leaving for Jade Mountain.
Chapter 4: A Royal Introduction
-Some slight word changes.
Chapter 5: A Bigger Royal Introduction
-Added details and descriptions early on.
-Foreshadowing of future information(already occurred)
-Cliff knows Moon's name but doesn't know Kinkajou.
-Not much difference in the chapter.
Chapter 6: A Tiny Bit of Happiness
-In the memory moment, Peacemaker struggled to comprehend feeling depressed for the first time.
-A little bit of rewording and grammatical fixes.
-Peacemaker is a bit questioning and weirded out about Mink's quick idea that Peacemaker doesn't deserve the bullying from other Nightwings.
-Small additional dialogue.
-Foreshadowing of future information(already occurred).
Chapter 7: Consequences of a Bet
-More description as usual.
-More details about Sharkbite and Starseeker(the two bullies).
-Not much changes.
Chapter 8: Darks, what did you do?
-In Clay's office, according to Peacemaker, Starseeker tried to do a good job lying being screwed over with Sharkbite making him look bad and Peacemaker's several witnesses and alibies.
-Each Dragonet of Destiny member has their own office excluding Starflight which they can be sent to depending on the teacher that caught the act.
-Peacemaker is a bit unsure at first calling his winglet his new friends(it's the first day)
-Peacemaker has some trouble with sleeping as either he gets forced awake by Kinkajou when she is back from the academy or he's sleeping under a mountain that could very well fall apart on one bad day.
-Darkstalker at first tries to gain distance away from Peacemaker as he sometimes rather be in a different room than having to hear Web's class.
Chapter 9: Together
-Added Details like the usual.
-A reference to some connection between Drytail and Ash.
-A little more dialogue between Moon and Peace in the memory moment. Moon shows a little extra concern about Peacemaker's mental health and bullying issues.
Chapter 10: Sky or Snow
-Rewording and extra details
-Cliff and Mink's argument gets heated enough that Cliff has smoke coming out of his ears while Mink has a bit of frostbreath smoke coming out of her mouth when Peacemaker breaks it up.
-Extra scenery description during the flight.
-A small showing of Peacemaker's embarrassment of being a NightRain hybrid.
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Strawberries and Darkness
OverigNote: It is recommended to read Peace and Its Shadow before coming here as some spoilers might be present. This isn't really a Wattpad story but it's just a collection of random things such as thoughts, artwork, etc specifically relating to Peace a...