The Teaser.

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🚨🚨TEASER ALERT🚨🚨

Ok guys !!! Here's my teaser for my upcoming story "Jane Doe." I really hope you like this ! Please give me feedback ASAP ! & I'll read it and possibly approve it (if i get criticism) right when I get back from camp!!
******Also this teaser is supposed to be like a journal entry..sum like that..
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She was like a microscope in ways.

Odd, I know.

But at times you just can't help but to think that. She could read you almost perfectly. Like a book. Or in this case, a microscope. Just a simple zoom and focus, and she can actually see you. For who you are. What you are. She was good like that. Great judge of character, you can say...

But there was just one problem. You could never read her--or discover her. There was no such thing as a simple "zoom and focus". It took more. You could never hint at her thoughts. At times you would have to refrain yourself from wanting to bash her skull wide open and devour all of her memories, thoughts, and most of all, deepest secrets.
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You could never look into her eyes and see what she's feeling, unless she wanted you to. When you'd think you'd said something that would anger her--or make her sad, especially, you'd never know. You could look into those big, soft brown eyes and see nothing but yourself. No hint of emotion at all.
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You see, she wasn't like most girls. Girls who wear their heart on their sleeves, girls who have loving parents--not a fucked up family, girls who never hesitate to say "I love you" to her boyfriend before kissing him on the lips......or the girl that plots revenge against Jenn--that SLUT who did her ex or current boyfriend at Todd's party, etc. She was different from that. She was...like a puzzle. All puzzle pieces black might I add. To keep herself well hidden. She was a puzzle with millions--trillions of pieces that confuse you when you try to put them together--frustrate you. Anger you! But you can't help but to try to put it together. She lures you in..making you-wanting you to solve it. But it's not easy. It never is. Being with her wasn't easy.
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She'd tell me how frightening her thoughts could be.

She'd tell me how monsters don't sleep under your bed, they sleep inside your head.

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She'd call herself dark.

She'd tell me too !

Show me.

She wasn't lying though. She was dark.

Then I discovered something after putting all of this together--finishing off her mind fucking puzzle, not really accomplishing anything, but figuring out one main thing.....

She is a Jane Doe.
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Ok so this teaser is a kinda supposed to be like a journal entry...so my stories obviously gonna be called "Jane Doe." it's a fanfic, main characters Dylan O'Brien (so the stories kinda about him), and """Jane Doe""". No that is not her real name, but you'll learn her name in the story...4th chapter or so. Yea.

Till then dawgs👊<--brofist YEEESHHH I AM A BRO!
~poop_man_stilinski

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