Was There Even A Point Of Me Trying To Be Nice To You?

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No Darren in this chapter just mostly Erick and Max

Another thing, 3 major changes and i can promise you, it'll be the last. Max's surname is now Evans i think it flows better than Hastings and Hastings is too feminine and Max is already soft enough, the other thing is Erick's eyes are now green, with Darren's being brown. i didn't like the idea of Erick and Max looking too much alike with the blue eyes and brown hair.

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 His New Toy

 

Was there even a point of me trying to be nice to you?!

 

 [Max's POV]

"Oh God, what I'm I going to do?" I muttered to myself, it seemed to turn a deeper shade of purple every time I looked at it and it stood out so much against my pale skin. I shouldn't be bothered about it, it would go in a few days but I could imagine Erick's face when he saw it, what I couldn't imagine is what he would do to me, I shuddered at the thought.

I stepped out of my bathroom and paced up and down my bedroom, maybe I should brainstorm ideas? "Make-up?" I mumbled to myself, my sister doesn't use any and my mom isn't as pale as me. Sighing, I ransacked my brain for more ideas...nothing.

I groaned in despair and punched the wall in frustration "Ow!!" I whimpered as I put my fist in my mouth.

"The hell is going on?" Maddie walked in, someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed

"I hurt myself" I slumped to the ground, closing my eyes so I wouldn't cry.

"How?"

"I punched the wall" I mumbled

"Max look at me" I opened my eyes to look at her only to feel my face flying in the opposite direction, now I was crying

"What was that for?!"

"You're a 17 year old boy, grow some!"

"Go away mean person! I thought you loved me" I had to admit to myself I was acting like a child now but she started it.

"It's called tough love. You're a crying attention seeker" I didn't even know what her problem was today; I think she was looking for someone to aim her grumpiness at.

"How am I attention seeking, you're the one who came into the room and slapped me!"

She opened her mouth and closed it shut again before nodding her head in agreement "true"

"Meany" I stuck my tongue at her before sucking on my bleeding fist, Maddie flinched I could tell she wanted to slap me again, I think I'm the only kid my age who could openly say they let their 10 year old sister beat them.

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