REVISION COMPLETE: Fixed major grammar issues, changed out-of-place scenes, and added more connections to parts in the later plot for consistency. Majority of dialogue has changed, as well as scenes being slightly altered.
Original Word Count: a little over 3000
New Word Count: 3747I'll be uploaded the original chapters onto a Google Doc for everyone to read. Each chapter will be uploaded as I go to edit them. Please copy and paste this into a browser:
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Before we start, I just need to say this so no one gets mad. This is not my original idea! I was reading many books about it. Lucy goes to Fiore Academy. there are 'troublemakers' that meet her. She has to then share a dorm with them because every girl dorm is full or something. I am not going to be a copy cat! If you have a book like this, just know I didn't mean to copy you! Thank you! Also, my book called The Darkest Time in Fairy Tail has gotten many views. So, as a little gift, I am making this book a little side book. (2024: Yeah... this was definitely HEAVILY inspired by what was popular at the time)
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Fiore Academy............ the best academy in Fiore. Just like any academy, there are 'bad boys' in this school. (2024:....ew...)
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"Hey, Flame Brain!" a raven-haired boy shouted.
"What's up, Ice Princess?" A pink-haired boy shouted as he caught up with the raven-haired boy. Just as they were walking, 6 more boys joined them.(2024: Okay I'll stop commenting on the story like this but... why the fuck did I write like this???)
"Have you guys heard? A new chick is transferring!" One of the blondes said.
"Yeah. Except she has a scholarship. No doubt she's the studious type." The bluenette said. The single statement caused the group to sigh. As they walked into a cafe, they noticed a small group of girls sitting at "their" table. And what made matters worse was that they were the group the boys labeled "nerds."
"Oi! Get out of our table!" The black-haired guy with piercings on his face shouted.
"S-Sorry!" The bluenette girl stuttered out with her friends getting up.
"W-We were just leaving anyway..!" A dark bluenette with pigtails whispered. The third bluenette got up as well. They left the cafe with all of their stuff.
"Geez, they didn't even put up a fight. How pathetic." The other blond with a lightning scar through his right eye said. They all sat down and returned to their usual. Suddenly, a blond-haired girl came into the cafe looking pretty mad. You could see the three bluenettes weakly trying to stop her.
"Excuse me, but did you just kick my friends out of their seats?" She asked.
"Uh, yeah? This is OUR table, after all!" The pinky said.
"I don't see your names on it, PINKY. And last I checked, you can't even own a designated spot in a public area." She crossed her arms.
"Hey! My hair is not pink! It is SALMON!" He shouted.
"Anyway, it doesn't matter. Everyone knows that we sit here every day. I suggest you leave before someone gets hurt," The blackette with a bang covering his eye said as he stood up.
"It's okay, Lucy... Let's just go to the park! We can hang out there instead..." One of the bluenettes said.
"Wha- But they... and he-.... Fine..." 'Lucy' finally let up, stepping away. But as she was walking out of the door, she glared back at the group. "But I'm warning you. The next time I see this happen, I will not hesitate to hurt you."
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Dorm S! ~Lucy Harem~
FanfictionCURRENTLY BEING REVISED/REWRITTEN - NEW STORYLINE 82 main chapters 3 special chapters 1 teaser chapter 7 authors note 3 contest chapters This is a Lucy Harem. And the book is an AU. Also, as the story goes, the characters become more off from the...