HAi <3
Name: Moonstar
If she has StarClan, or whatever, than THIS is not acceptible. Moon-? Sorry, no. Also, I would like to know her warrior name.
Age: 32 Moons
K
Gender: Female
K
Sexuality: Bisexual
Yas
Clan: LunarClan
Mkay
Personality: Fierce, Strict, Kind if you get to know her, Mean at times, Leader-like, Strong Leader
Too many good things. SHE NEEDS FLAWS!!
Appearance: Midnight black with white underbelly. Gold star on chest. Navy blue eyes, right one is blind.
Okay. No NAVY blue eyes. It's fine, but blue is overused (unless a cat that NEEDS blue eyes) and half blind is fine. Just change the color of the eyes.
Mate: Dunno
Crush: Dunno
Kits: Dunno
Family: Dunno
....
Backstory: No backstory yet
REALLY?
Overall, I give a 4/10. All my rants are above.
