Name: Icefeather
Neat!
Gender: Tom
YASSSS
Appearance: pure white coat, Amber eyes, tip of tail is light gray
I wish you gave me more detail. Even a picture would do! But with this tiny thing, I guess it's nice.
Personality: sweet, strict, caring, forgiving, easily annoyed and can snap if he is annoyed, usually soft spoken, can be shy
Sweet and strict? No. EASILY ANNOYED ANDDDDD SOFTSPOKEN? no. nonononono. Shy is WAAAAYYY to overused. Same as forgiving.
Clan: MistClan (yes I've seen it before but it goes with his backstory)
Oh. Okay. SO USED BUT I SEE YOUR MESSAGE
Rank: medicine cat
WHOOOO
Backstory: originally born into ShadowClan, he was naturally very interested in being a medicine cat. Their leader, his father, however, didn't want him to be. He had at some point had his mind set on Icefeather, then Icekit, to be the deputy one day. Icefeather didn't want this. When he was apprenticed as a warrior, he began secretly training with RiverClans medicine cat. When a young cat from RiverClan named Mistfur asked him to join her in leaving with a small band of cats from each Clan, he agreed. He thanked RiverClans medicine cat and went with Mistfur, who eventually became Miststar, and created MistClan. He became their first medicine cat.
OooOOOOOOOOOOOHHH! That makes sense. BUT WHO LEAVES THEIR CLAN?!?! HE NEEDS TO HELP RIVERCLAN!!! No details on that >,<
He's not allowed a mate, but he secretly has a crush on Miststar. He's not allowed to have kits.
Good.
Name of father: Whiteclaw, then Whitestar
Whiteclaw is overused. I think it migggghhhhttt also be canon....? I'm not sure.
Name of mother: Blackpelt
WAY OVERUSED
No siblings.Awwww...
OVERALL, I give you 5.5/10. All my rants above
