Rating Your Warrior OCs

Berrystorm (Late)

Name: Berrystorm

This name is fairly common, Berry- is common and so is -storm, but Storm as a prefix is more common than storm as a suffix.

But it's cute!

10/10

Age: 39 moons (she will die at 41 moons)

Great! 10-10

Gender: she-cat

Lol, that's fine, but tom OCs seem to be less common nowadays...

10-10

Rank: Medicine Cat

So many medicine cat OCs...

I won't lie, but I have so many medicine cats as well xD

And every Clan needs at least one medicine cat.

10-10

Clan: OceanClan

This sounds very cute, but it is the MOST OVERUSED--okay not really, but close--CLAN NAME EVER.

Do cats even know what an ocean is?

8-10

Appearance: a thick-furred calico cat who's fur is beautifully flowing. She has gentle, Amber eyes that welcome any cat.

So, something like this:

Yas, I love it! When you write it, it doesn't have much description, but enough to make me look for this cat on the interwebs because I've seen it everywhere xD

Welcoming and friendly amber eyes is wonderful! Thick fur is also amazing.

10-10

Personality: friendly, caring, forgiving, and always likes to do what's best for the clan. She tries to be as modest as she can be and takes good care of every one if her patients. She can be quite inquisitive though, which causes some trouble sometimes.

Friendly is overused, but you need those kinds of cats in your life!

Caring and forgiving are also overused, but she is a medicine cat and used to be a kittypet.

Oo, Modest and inquisitive! Noice!

10-10

Backstory: Berrystorm was formerly a kittypet called Muffin Overused to death. Kittypet/rouge/loner to clan. , but has escaped her owners one day I like that part :P . She ran away from them at the age of 5 moons because she was getting terribly abused ouch , but she could still take care of herself, and so she did as a loner I love Muffin . This proved to be harder than expected, and has trouble hunting without trespassing on a Clan's territory. One day, she was caught by OceanClan's leader, Goldstar, hunting in their territory. Goldstar understood Muffin's story and was happy to take her in, and so she began training as an apprentice soon, with the name Berrypaw. At first she wanted to become a warrior cat, but noticed OceanClan's lack for a medicine cat or anyone willing for the task. She offered to train as a medicine cat and began training with ForestClan's medicine cat at whatever gatherings she was taken to. She finally told Goldstar about this, who admitted receiving a prophecy about it duh lol xD . And so Berrypaw began to see the medicine cat more and more, and finally she had learned the ways of a medicine cat completely. She became her clan's medicine cat, Berrystorm, and soon got an apprentice of her own, Snowpaw AWWWWW . He learned quickly and before already had a fascination with herbs. Berrystorm was honored to have such an awesome apprentice to call her own. Snowpaw soon became a medicine cat, now Snowheart, around the time Goldstar retired as leader and became Goldpelt once again, but now as an elder instead of warrior. 

10-10

Kits/mate/crush: can't have any

YAS GOOD JOB, MATE
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THAT SOUNDED WEIRD
HEHEH

98-100!