Moonpaw/fire and Adderpaw/claw

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Moonpaw/Moonfire

NO. ABSOLOUTLY NOT. MOON IS FORBIDDEN!

0 points

8 moons/9 moons

....what? A medicine cat at 9 moons? Explain.

1 point

Female

K. 10 points

Med cat apprentice/med cat

I don't understand the medicine cat thing... 2 points.

Thunderclan

This is the worst canon clan to be a part of right now... 4 points

Black with a silver crescent moon on forehead and sapphire eyes

*chokes* NO.

Black is fine, but NO BLUE EYES OR THAT PERFECT CRESENT MOON. NO.

5 points

Stubborn, kind

I need more than this. Also, it doesn't match well. 1 point.

Meets Adderpaw and becomes his mate and runs away with him, returning to thunderclan to have her kits.

NO. NO MATES. ABSOLOUTLY NO.

0 points

Other: has direct communication with Starclan at times when it's needed.

EH, fine. 9 points.


31/100 NO


Adderpaw/Adderclaw

YOU CANNOT BECOME A WARRIOR AT NINE MOONS. ITS AT TWELEVE WHEN YOU CAN BECOME A WARRIOR.

ALSO, CORRECT ME IF IM ERONG, BUT I THINK ADDERCLAW IS CANON

EITHER WAY, CLAW IS OVERUSED TO THE DYING POINT AND ADDER IS VERY COMMON

1 point

8 moons/9 moons

NO 1 point

Tom

Yay! 10 points

Warrior apprentice/warrior

....no

5 points

Thunderclan

5 points

Brown with emerald eyes

This is fine, but I would like more info. 7 points.

Stubborn, kind

*dies* NO

2 points


40/100

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