Name: shellblaze
Shell- is underused, so good job! -blaze is pretty common, though. 10/10
Age:36 moons
10/10
Gender: tom
10/10 YASS
Rank: warrior
10/10
Clan: twilightclan
Too overused. 5/10
Appearance: a large broad shouldered brownish ginger tom with forest green eyes
I like the broad shoulders! Good job!
Forest green eyes are pretty common, but it fits so...
10/10
Personality: shellblaze is a energetic and loving tom aww, yes whom (think of who and whom like he and him. In this sentence it should be "who") at times can be somewhat thoughtless k he's also a really bad at flirting PERFECTIONand pick up on when someone flirts with him
XD
10/10
Backstory: shellblaze was born into twilightclan to his parents moonfall and redpelt. He had a relatively normal kithood and apprenticehood but once he became a warrior his world was turned upside down. His clan was driven out of their territory by rouges. Their clan after moons found a new territory tough it wasn't as good as their former one. They slowly adjusted and are now living quite happily in their new home.
...Moonfall.
MOONFALL
NO
Respect is overused, but whatever.
4/10
It doesn't explain his kithood and apprenticehood much...
DId he have a kit hood crush?
Mate: not really interested
Crush: none
Kits: none
K 10/10
Family: mother: moonfall father: redpelt sisters: sandstone gingershine brother: turtletfoot
TURTLES!
Moonfall, no.
Redpelt, eh
Sandstone, super overused
Gingershine, fine
Turtlefoot, yes
6/10
OVERALL, 85/100
