Shellblaze

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Name: shellblaze

Shell- is underused, so good job! -blaze is pretty common, though. 10/10

Age:36 moons

10/10

Gender: tom

10/10 YASS

Rank: warrior

10/10

Clan: twilightclan

Too overused. 5/10

Appearance: a large broad shouldered brownish ginger tom with forest green eyes

I like the broad shoulders! Good job!

Forest green eyes are pretty common, but it fits so...

10/10

Personality: shellblaze is a energetic and loving tom aww, yes whom (think of who and whom like he and him. In this sentence it should be "who") at times can be somewhat thoughtless k he's also a really bad at flirting PERFECTIONand pick up on when someone flirts with him

XD

10/10

Backstory: shellblaze was born into twilightclan to his parents moonfall and redpelt. He had a relatively normal kithood and apprenticehood but once he became a warrior his world was turned upside down. His clan was driven out of their territory by rouges. Their clan after moons found a new territory tough it wasn't as good as their former one. They slowly adjusted and are now living quite happily in their new home.

...Moonfall.

MOONFALL

NO

Respect is overused, but whatever.

4/10

It doesn't explain his kithood and apprenticehood much...

DId he have a kit hood crush?

Mate: not really interested

Crush: none

Kits: none

K 10/10

Family: mother: moonfall father: redpelt sisters: sandstone gingershine brother: turtletfoot

TURTLES!

Moonfall, no.

Redpelt, eh

Sandstone, super overused

Gingershine, fine

Turtlefoot, yes

6/10


OVERALL, 85/100

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