Name: Thrushwood, formerly Thrushpaw and Thornkit
Cute! Why did it start as Thornkit? I'll read in the backstory.
Age: About 55 moons
Okie. Good :3
Gender: She cat
:3
Clan: WingClan
Overused. To. DEATH.
Appearance: A brown tabby with piercing green eyes, she has a white underbelly, paws, and the tip of her tail. Her ears are black. She has one claw that looks like a Thruth's beak(Explained in back story)
I like her. Brown tabbies are great, green eyes are common but natural, white points, and black ears. But the black ears are not possible (nvm maybe?). One claw that looks like a beak is not possible. But I'll read the backstory and come back.
EDIT: Okie, I'm back. Makes more sense, I guess.
Personality: Harsh at times, but can be really sweet. Protective, Clumsy, Funny, Dark at times
Short and not very descriptive. Harsh and sweet are SUPER overused. Protective is not very common, apparently. Clumsy is good. Funny is great, but doesn't go with "Harsh at times". Dark is not... well.... yeah.
Backstory: OKAY As a kit, she was known as Thornkit, she would be very protective over her sibilings, Birdkit, and Quakekit. She had one older sister, Weedfeather, the medicine cat. As an apprentice, as she was in her apprentices ceremony she tripped over her own paws and her claw got caught in a rock, causing her claw to break and stick out like a Thrush's beak earning the name Thrushpaw OWOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWWWWW. From then on her sisters and her one brother would stick by her side, and that's when she would grow dark. She told them she could do it on her own, her mentor would tell her she was pathetic, so she would be harsh. Later Quakepaw and Birdpaw earned their warrior named after saving Thrushpaw from a pheasant, they were Quakewing, and Birdfang. Thrushpaw became lonely and started wandering. Until she bumped into another apprentice from her clan, Stonepaw. They started talking about their pasts and became good friends. As warriors Stoneeye and Thrushwood became mates, which surprised the clan due to their personalities. The fought through things together, like sicknesses and loneliness , and later had three beautiful kits. Nutkit, Sparrowkit, and the runt, a tom named Tinykit.
This is cute. But, why a thrush? Why not "Beakwood" or something? That needs to be explained.
Kits: Nutkit (She) Sparrowkit ( She) Tinykit (Tom)
:3 Warrior/Medicine cat names? Ranks?
Mate: Stoneeye
Overused name.
Crush: Stonepaw
Lol, she only loved him as an apprentice xDDDD
(Have you noticed that I've stopped using numbers?)
OVERALL, Thrushwood needs more work. All of my rambles are above.
