Name: Flameflake
Pure.
10/10
Age: 23 moons
Mkay, good age for a warrior.
10/10
Gender: Tom
*gasps really loudly* *faints* WTSC YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS
I WISH I WAS ALLOWED TO GIVE YOU MORE THAN I CAN *glares at Brindleshine again*
Brindleshine: What? I'm not giving you more numbers to choose from.
Uuuugh, fine.
10/10
(But really 100000/10)
Rank: warrior
HYPE
10000/10
Brindleshine: Can't do that, bro.
Gah.
10/10
Clan: AmberClan
I'm guessing that this might be overused, but I've personally never seen it before and I like it <3
It's just plain cute.
10/10
Appearance: Cream tabby with vibrant peach-colored stripes, which earned him his name. Dark green eyes that seem to hold mischief.
I had to check online to see if this was possible, and apparently it is!
I love the detail in the eyes, it's amazing. Thanks for telling me that his fur is the reason for his name!
10/10
Keep the green, even though it is overused, because I love it.
Personality: Brave Common, determined Basically around Really uncommon, and always is encouraging himself to win every battle and conquer every challenge that comes his way Completely original! Me likey. He never backs down from a challenge yup, no matter how tough the opponent "...filled me with determination." . He never thinks of how he'll come out of the fight or challenge I'm in love, I think . He is quite mischievous and is always playing little tricks on other warriors yus. I like how you didn't say 'prankster' but you went for detail. . He is easily befriended, friendly, and easily annoyed It goes together! . He thinks about his mother and sister's death, the forestfire he experienced as a kit, and let's himself cry about those three things whenever he is alone poor thing :( . He plays his pranks with his best friend, Ivyleaf.
10/10. So much detail!
Backstory: when Flameflake was 4 moons old, a forest fire suddenly happened and destroyed AmberClan camp, which caused death to Seakit and Marigoldflame ;-; . AmberClan had to find a new territory wow, SkyClan when it just started and had ITS forest fire (spoiler warning), they just stayed there. Wow. AmberClan and SkyClan are di-ff-er-ent. . Flameflake was so horrorstruck by these things, he always remembers them but tries to cover up his sad emotions, which is why he plays little pranks to lighten the mood poor thing, and that makes sense. . He still always cries about the drama in his life when he was so young.
I love the explaining about the fire, but I need more. Apprenticehood (you gotta love it), and warriorhood. It has little about either of those.
6/10
Mate/crush/kits: none, and he doesn't plan to have any of those things any time soon
XD Darn, I was really liking him
Other: his parents are Needlefoot COOT(alive) and Marigoldflame POOR KOOT KOOT (dead), and his littermates are Crookedpelt I almost read 'Crookedjaw' XD(alive), Crimsonfoot KOOT KOOT(alive), and Seakit POOR KOOT KOOT(dead)
Lol, I'm not weird at all....
Overall, 96/100. It's a.. DONT CHANGE IT MUCH, JUST ADD MORE TO THE BACKSTORY, kinda thing. :)
Now lemme go write a bit, lol, and enjoy your victory!
