A/N: I'm going to try a different style
Name: Bloodpaw/heart
Great! But why the prefix Blood-? What made that prefix come to her mother's mind? 5/10
Age: 7 Moons (warrior at 16 moons)
Mkay 10/10
Gender: She-cat
Kay 9/10
Rank: Apprentice to warrior
Yusssss 10/10
Clan: MoonClan
*coughs* WHAT?! 3/10
Appearance: Black and gray, tiny cat with yellow eyes
To short. Fluffy? Slick? Silky fur? Otherwise, it's fine. 7/10
Personality: Kind of selfish, determined, conceited, helpful and caring sometimes
Short. And how can you be selfish and caring? Points off. 7/10
Backstory: Bloodpaw as an apprentice never really made it that far in life. She trained hard and hard but never became a warrior until she was 16 Moons old.
What about her kithood? Why is her name Blood-? Why would she train hard if she is selfish? 4/10
None
Great! :D 10/10
Overall, I give a 51/100. All of my rants above.
