Fawnwillow (SORRY FOR IT BEIN SO LONG ;-;)

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Name: Fawnwillow

Adorable. 10 points.

Age: 28 Moons

10 points. Not to young, not to old. 

Gender: Female

Mkay, 10 points.

Rank: Warrior

May StarClan light your path. 10 points.

Clan: WindClan

Not very many people use WindClan. 10 points.

Appearance: Light brown she-cat with white paws and underbelly, green-blue eyes, and scar on her muzzle from a fox

Thank you for adding the scar. As for the Eyes, I advise to change the blue a little because that is overused TO DEATH, but she has a little white, so it's possible. 9 3/4 points.

Personality: Ever since Fawnwillow was a kit, she wanted to be the best cat she could be for her mom. She wanted to make her proud. She soon became very strict and started to tell other cats what to do in order to make her mom proud. When she finally found a mate, he helped show her that her mother would be proud of her no matter what. She soon became kind and loving towards all cats. She loves her kits and other kits like they are her own.

Awww,  that's sweet. 10 points.

Backstory: Fawnwillow was born with a special ability. She knew when, where, and how each cat, including herself, was going to die. Her leader thought it was a blessing. Her mother thought it was a curse. She thought it was anything but a blessing. She had dreams all throughout her kithood about her father. He was in the unknown, far away, and was hurt and starving. She set out on a quest to find him and when she did, he was almost dead. She had to say goodbye to him and go back. During her apprenticeship, she kept having the dreams. She had a dream once that her future mate would drown in the river in the next weeks. She continued through her apprenticeship and became a great warrior.

Aww, that's cool.

I like that even she can see herself die....

10 points.

But... what about her warriorhood?

9 points.

Kits: Willowpaw (Willowsplash), Dunepaw (Dunefall), and Fallenpaw (Fallenshade)

Cute! 10 points

Mate: Shadestrike

Family: Emberwhisker (Mother), Woodeddusk (Father), Sparrowstripe (Brother)

Great! 10 points for both the mate and family.



Overall, 98 3/4. All my rambles above.





SORRY FOR THIS BEING SO LATE

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