Chapter 6: Davids suprise

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Liza's POV

I was just chilling at my apartment making a YouTube vid when I got a phone call from David
" Hey pookie"
"Hey David"
"So tonight I'm taking you out on a date"
" okay what time will you pick me up?"
"Like 6 ish so be ready by then!"
"What should I wear"
"Something not to fancy and pretty casual"
"Okay bye Buba"
"Bye pookie"

I wonder where David is taking me, normally he tells me before we go on a date but I guess this one is a mystery...

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At 6 pm on the dot I got a text from David telling me he was outside. I was wearing little shorts a floaty t shirt and one of Davids hoodies. I wore my white converse that David had got me for my birthday. I hopped into his car and kissed him on the cheek.
D- Wow babe....you look amazing
I blush and try to hide my smile.
L- so where are we going anyway
D- It's a surprise!
L- Oh how I love surprises
I roll my eyes but then laugh. David turns up the radio.
L- Omg I love this song
David whipped out his camera and said this is driving with Liza!
I stared dancing and singing along

We're half way there
Livin' on a prayer
Take my hand and we'll make it
I swear, livin' on a prayer

I grabbed Davids hand and he giggled behind the camera at my horrible dancing skills. Then he turned the camera off and we burst out laughing.
A couple minutes later he told me we had arrived. He said I had to close my eyes so he put his hands over them. So I let him and told him not to steer me into anything. When we arrived he opened my eyes and I gasped.
L- It's amazing!
I fell to my knees and started crying, I loved it so much.
I front of me was a boardwalk and at the end was a platform surrounded by candles with a table and two chairs.
L- David you didn't have to do this
D- Anything for you baby
He put his arm around me and kissed my forehead. Then he said to me I have one more suprise.
David ran away and came back with a micro phone.
D- Liza Koshy, you are my rock, you are my world I love you so much and I can't wait to see this relationship grow and grow. I want to tell you you make me the happiest man on earth and I love spending every second with you. I know Liza that we are still young and to young to get married but Liza koshy I want you to promise me that we will stay together for ever..
He got down on one knee and said
D- Elizabeth Koshy will you promise to marry me one day?
I noodled my head and wiped the tears away from my eyes, I gave him my hand and he slipped the ring on, I jumped into his arms and told him I loved him so so much and nothing will ever bring us apart...

Thanks for reading this, I have been getting some support and it's amazing as I wrote this for fun and didn't actually think anyone would read it. I hoped you liked this chapter as it was one of my favourites to write and as always leave your feedback in the comments to help me improve and Thanks Guys!❤️❤️❤️  oh and btw that was a promise ring just incase anyone got confused so it wasn't an engagement ring 💍

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