SmackDown: MadMike's Revenge!

Round 4 Results

Is it hard yet...? Nice work on Round 4, everyone. We had just one dropout, so that sucks, but oooh yeah, life goes on, long after the thrill of living is gone.

Ready to see the results for Round 4?

Ready to see who is moving on to Round 5, out of Dudecore and Hermaphrodeity and into the merged tribe?

Ready to see who will go to Redemption Island and face off against bloodsword, deciding once and for all who wins their way back into the game?

There's only going to be one elimination this round—from the Dudecore tribe—as NimrodKirkpatrick opted to drop out. So consider yourselves saved, Hermaphrodeity.

As usual, the highest-scoring person will choose who visits Exile Island.

Let's get to the results. And remember, SmackDowners, this time you'll be fighting for a grand total of 30 points.

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Detailed results for each person, divided by tribe (so feel free to scroll past the tribe you're not on, or don't):

Dudecore - Sub-genre: Military SF

AngusEcrivain

Judgement by JettaFrame

Prompt - 4

Grammar - 4

Enjoyability - 2

Waffled. Storyline lacked impact. Effective humor and vivid description were however strong points of this story. Felt that this author simply tried to cover too much in too little time.

MadMikeMarsbergen's comment: Spotted a few more errors than would suit a 4 for SGP, so we'll drop that down to a 3.

Total score - 9/15

Judgement by MadMikeMarsbergen

1. Prompt Adherence - 5/5

All prompts were used effectively. Though I do wonder what Courtney would think of her character. "Do a Trump" was hilarious in this one.

2. Spelling, Grammar and Punctuation - 3/5

Some missing hyphens, a semicolon where a colon should be used, and some additional commas would have improved readability.

3. Story Enjoyability - 5/5

Another hilarious Angus tale. I knew from the title that I'd enjoy it. Excellent descriptions throughout and fast-paced.

Total score - 13/15

Combined score - 22/30

elveloy

Judgement by HardeeBurger

Okay! As a preface, I must say that I don't know who the Survivor characters are, I don't know the songs or the bands that are singing them, though I do know at least what sort of music Slayer plays, based on their awesome cover art.