Okay so I'm sorry I haven't gotten a new chapter out yet, but school has been a bit time-consuming so far. I have AP Art this year, which ends up taking up quite a bit of my time because we have three pieces to do every three weeks, and they have to be portfolio quality--which means that they have to be our best. Which means that I spend quite a bit of time on it. And then I also have AP Lit, which makes me do vocab every week and a poetry analysis every weekend.
Anyway, enough about my heavy workload. In the beginning chapters of this story, I had no idea who Mari was. I didn't truly know her personality, or how she would interact with people. Over the course of the story, I began to understand who she is. But now that I know her, the first chapters betray her character. They don't show who she really is--so what I'm gonna do is go back over what I have published so far and fine tune things. The events should be just about the same, but the chapters will be truer to Mari's character.
There is no need to read over the edited chapters, but you can if you like. It will probably give a better feel for Mari, though.
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Betrayed Innocence [ On Hold ]
FanficA child, hurt, abused, climbs a mountain from which none return. She trips, and falls into a world completely foreign to her. Through the kindness of those she meets and with her own DETERMINATION, she will free the Monsters trapped beneath the moun...
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