CHASING CARS:

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Narrative P.O.V:

Both cars are going at a high speed along the empty roads.

Both drivers are very skilled and drift across corners perfectly.

This is almost like a race.

This is exciting!

This is exhilarating!

This is fast paced!

This is a close battle!

Jordan makes a terrible error and decides to put the pedal to the metal.

'Ryder' follows behind.

Jordan's slight error causes his car to crash through a fence and he gets stuck in a field of mud.

RYDER: "I've got you now Jordan Crenshaw!"

JORDAN: "Okay... Okay... You win, let's be civil about this..."

RYDER: "Hands behind your head, and get on the ground."

JORDAN: "Fine!"

Jordan spots one of the broken fence posts. He quickly grabs it and swings it at Ryder, who grabs the weapon.

JORDAN: "B-But how did you...?"

RYDER: "This isn't my first fight kid, though it looks like this might be yours. Remember the first, because it's gonna be your last!" *PUNCH*

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Ryder's P.O.V:

All bark and no bite, what a privileged little warped pooch you turned out to be, Crenshaw.

Guess it runs in the family. All that's left is to call my partner in justice.

SKY: "Ryder?"

RYDER: "Good news, Sky. I found the culprit the FBI was right to work with our business."

SKY: "Was it really Jordan Crenshaw?"

RYDER: "You're damn right. I told you so!"

SKY: "Darn it, you win our bet. But he's just a high school student... I never thought that he could cause that kind of damage."

RYDER: "Remember, André Davenport."

SKY: "Right..."

RYDER: "Besides, when you were in Middle school you had the power to hack the entirety of South Ridge."

SKY: "I guess so. I should probably return to Westchester soon, Max is waiting for me to finish this mission."

RYDER: "As expected from Mrs Erin Crumbly."

ERIN: "Shut up! What if Jordan hears our identities?!"

RYDER: "Incapacitated."

ERIN: *Sigh* "Do you always have to knock them out?"

RYDER: "Hey, it's clearly working. Besides, this time it was...personal."

ERIN: "How so?"

RYDER: "He put his hands on my boy."

ERIN: "Daniel?! Oh no... Is he hurt?!"

RYDER: "Daniel is safe. There's a girl Crenshaw took captive in the trunk of his car. Someone called Renée."

ERIN: "Renée? Wait, as in-? Oh dear god... Don't open that trunk!"

RYDER: "Why? I need to let the poor girl out, she'll suffocate!"

ERIN: "Y-You have a point, but... If I'm right, then I don't think you'll like what you fi-"

RYDER: "Wonderful see ya!"

*Hangs up*

Alright, let's see what the damage is. I hope Crenshaw didn't hurt the poor girl when he crashed his car.

Okay, FBI open up.

RENÉE: "Thank you... Thank you so much..."

RYDER: "...?!"

That face... That diary she's holding...

No, it can't be...

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