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All reviews are done by @FallenAngel128 & @CHBlackk ( Choose which one of us you want to review your book. You can choose both if you want too.)

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We will review and rate your book on these subjects:

* The Cover

 * The plot

* The description

* The characters

* The grammar and punctuation

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* We will read 3 chapters of your book. 

Payment:  read and review 1 chapter of The Fall Of Eden by FallenAngel128 or Torn Roses by CHBlackk. After the payment is completed, we will get to review your work. 

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This review was done by @FallenAngel128

*Cover: Rating: 3/10. To be honest, after reading your story, I don't understand your cover. Maybe you have a good reason behind it which I don't know. But it does not strike me as a fantasy book, neither does it tell me anything about what I can expect from your story, unfortunately. It looks like feathers, and I'm not sure what to make of it. I think your book throws us into a wonderful fantasy world, and I wish that the cover would reflect more of that.

Description: Rating 4/10. Your description is too short in my opinion, and it doesn't say anything about what the plot actually is. We get to know that it's about some creatures, but is not enough to pull a reader in. In contrast to your actual story, the description is poor and lacks a hook. I suggest, writing a longer one and mentioning what kind of creatures are involved and what we can expect from them. Throw us into a fantasy world like no other!

Grammatical and punctuation: Rating 10/10. I salute your writing! It was almost flawless. I did not see any errors to point out in spelling or punctuation. The grammar was on point as well. Very well done! Plus, I liked that you had a perfect length to the paragraphs, not too long and not too short. It makes the text seem neat and easy to read!

Character design: Rating 8/10. You have some amazingly interesting characters!! I don't know even if I can call them characters. I think it's more accurate to say, that you write about some amazingly fascinating creatures. There's none your story lack. We got Mermaids, Angels, Death, the collector of pure souls (not sure what to call him). What I liked most was that your prologue was very intriguing in the way you introduced the first creature/spirit, and then you kept introducing rest of them throughout the next chapters, but you managed to connect them in the end to the first happening. 

These are reviews by @CHBlackk

 * I loved how this story just started with a BAM. There was no intro or description of the world or the personality of a protagonist. It just hit me all of a sudden, so when I finished one part, I wasn't hesitant to continue reading the next ones. I was confused about nagas and all, but I think that's because of me being a doofbag and not knowing a few things xD I'm still wondering what gender is the protagonist, just because of this sentence: I prefer to look like a woman, cause people are more likely to trust one. So, I still don't know what's really going on, but I think it's a she. I am a sucker for Scottish or any kind of clans really, so this story especially drew my attention. I did, however, notice some grammar mistakes, but they can be easily overlooked, since your story is so magnetic, inviting and intriguing.  

* Your poetry collection sure is one of a kind! It contains so many different poems, styles, moods, stories... Really incredible! Some of your poems are long, some are short, but no matter the length, they all carry the same amount of feelings we probably wish we never felt them. You truly are a one of a kind, not just anyone can describe one emotion in so many different and vivid ways. I am in love with your poems, I couldn't adore them more. They are the kind of poems I'd read whenever I didn't know how to cope with my feelings. Your poems are like a guide how to survive through these heartbreaks and various anxieties.  

* I haven't watched the movie because my first goal is to read all the books. But, hoping the fanfiction isn't that much of a spoiler, the parts that I read were pretty intense. You kept the reader engaged in the story, there's always something going on. Either, you are revealing us her peculiarity or a bit of her past, the weird relationship with the skeleton butler, creepy grandma going on... Your story is anything but boring, it's like you were born with a peculiarity of being a great writer. I am not fond of fanfictions even if they're about the fandoms I'm in, but this one is a real gem and after reading the books and seeing the movie, this fanfiction just might be the next thing on my reading list.