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REVIEW: THE DRAGON'S SCALE

Admin writing review: CHBlackk

Author: Cross-Warrior

Title: The Dragon's Scale

Genre: Fantasy

The Cover: 10/10

The cover looks absolutely amazing! From the font to the background and the whole ambience. It really captures what your story is like and how does reading it feels! With that dragon crawling up and metallic looking font matches the fantastic feel of your story. The font is big enough, it's easy to read, it fits the cover, everything is just the best. That is certainly the type of a cover that draws a reader closer and closer until they completely fall in your story!

The Description: 10/10

Another part of your book where I will speak of perfection! I love every part of the description since it's so wonderfully worded and just by reading it and it's not an info dump. Some books have basically a whole summary written as a description, but yours just says what's the idea of your book and how will your character try to learn more about this 'gift' - is it okay if I call it a gift? The description keeps most of your book wrapped in a mystery while you leave some pieces for the reader to pick up and continue to the chapters. Really, amazing!

The Plot: 10/10

I read only three chapter, which is the deal, but I can't explain how much I enjoyed reading those. With the first chapter, you opened a world to what Joshua's dreams are doing to him and how it affects him, which is really intriguing to read! I love that your story takes a slow pace. Your chapters are a bit long by Wattpad's standards, but I barely noticed it. Your plot is something new in the world of fantasy books and it's seriously so refreshing to read something that hasn't been done before! 

The Character: 10/10

Another 10 out of 10! One thing I need to say is I'm thankful you didn't drop in 6 characters at once and try to explain the differences between them in one paragraph! I've read a lot of books that do that, but thankfully, yours isn't one of them. Joshua and Hannah are the ones I got to meet more closely and without specifically pointing out what are they like, you managed to make them realistic. Joshua is the kid with problems, a bully and secrets and from what I've read, Hannah is worried about him and would rather be anywhere else than with her class. They're realistic, they're complex and there's still so much to learn about them! That's what makes everything that more exciting!

Grammar & Punctuation: 10/10

I think I'm in no place to tell you where your grammar should be fixed or what you should change. Afterall, you were the one correcting my chapter and helped me find errors. I'm no expert, but I still find grammar important. Sometimes I miss the details because English is not my first language, but I'm still kind of a grammar nazi when it comes to grammatical errors. I spotted NONE of those! No grammar or punctuation mistakes, which gave me the feeling I was reading a book that is more than soon to be published. 

Advice & Overall Thoughts: 

I have nothing more to say about this. I have no advice for you since everything I've read spoke directly to my soul. Your story isn't just one in a million, it's written with very specific details that give off the feeling they've been chosen carefully. It's obvious you make sure what you write is worded right, and it that sounds like it should've. I dare say your book's future is most bright and I sincerely hope one day I'll see it resting on one of my shelves. It's been a real pleasure a book like yours that still has so many things in store.