Wonderland Reviews And Covers [OPEN]

REVIEW: LIFE IS A HUGE MESS #2

Admin writing review: @FallenAngel128

Author: @Annabeth_Chase008

Title: Life Is A Huge Mess

Genre: Poetry

Cover: Rating 10/10.

I know that this cover was made by one of our own Wonderland admins. And she did a hell of a good job in my opinion. This cover fits your poetry, and it draws attention to readers. It's beautiful!

Description: Rating 9/10.

I liked the short and simple description. You were straightforward about what the deal was. And telling us that the poetry is very personal to you, calls to me to have a look inside. Words are very powerful, they conjure feelings! That's why if a promise of deep poetry is on the table, I always just have to have a look. I just saw one misspelled word, "This poems," I think you meant, "These poems." And I would suggest cutting the last sentence off, " And they are written by me." Because you mention above that they are your truest feelings and thoughts, so there's no need to verify that it's written by you. Other than that, well done!

Grammar and punctuation: Rating 9/10.

Your poems are very neatly done. They look professional, and they are an easy read. I salute you for writing your poetry with care. It adds more beauty to your poems. Also, good grammar and punctuation give your poems the correct strength, an impact to each sentence. I really enjoyed reading this.

Characters: Rating 10/10.

Now, to my favorite part. This is where I get to gush over your poems because they were amazing! It's simple as that. They drew me in, they made me feel. They laid a heaviness over my heart, and reminiscence in my mind. I loved how each poem had a setting and a clear message. Sometimes it's so hard to put feelings into words, but you did just that. You made me relate, and understand you. That's exactly what a true poet needs to be able to do.

Advice and overall thoughts:

Sometimes poems can be really hard to review. Mostly because they are personal, and I feel there's really no one's business to judge someone's personal stuff. That's one, two: Most poetry is beautiful because it always comes from the heart, so it's hard to distinguish between what's really good and what is bad. But, what made your poetry to my top 3 list on wp is that they were so relatable. And the feelings of them were raw and beautiful. My favorite was " Caged." I loved it, because I once too felt just like that. Also, I loved "Gold" because I interpreted it as you're talking about a society that has become obsessed with materialistic possessions, and how that is poisoning our minds. I believe so too. My best advice to you is, never stop writing poetry!