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REVIEW #2: CALL ME HERO

Admin writing  the review: 

Author: @Epicadrenaline

Title: Call Me Hero

Genre: Poetry

Cover  10/10:

A very mysterious and epic cover. Definitely, something that is easily  noticeable. It gives off a very intriguing vibe like it has a secret and draws the reader into taking a look at whats inside. I think that was a very good choice.  It soothes the whole team of your epic/poetry. Bravo!

Description 10/10:

Short and intriguing descriptions. You also keep a good mystery to your text. This is definitely a book I would've picked up if I saw it somewhere in a bookshop. And after reading the description I would head to the register to buy it. The first line is a knockout. "Some thought he was just a bit sick in the head." Who, what, why? This is very good to draw a reader in. After reading the description I was excited to dig into the book. It's also very neatly and simply written. Good job.

The plot 9/10:

Wow. Wrestling, emotionally complicating characters...  Color me obsessed! I loved how you easily described the mental state of your characters within the plot that surrounding wrestling and all bad things combined. After 3 chapters it's hard to tell where exactly this story is going, but so far the fascinating part is how it all starts in a bar, drunken tales, and mishaps and it continues on to wrestling. It doesn't get boring, and I feel due to your writing style the whole plot unravels in a unique way, bit by bit.

Characters 10/10:

From the very first sentence, I was pulled into the story, and I was amazed! Everything flowed so smoothly with the characters, their actions and their state of mind. I really applaud you for putting together a masterpiece like this in rhymes. The surge of waves and feelings of the characters are continuously showed, and as I read I got captivated by them. The Main character had an easy breezy about him, but also wavered so much in his emotions, it was like a rollercoaster ride that I enjoyed. Honestly, you did great! Better than great, perfect in characterization. 

Grammar/ Punctation 10/10:

I said previously that I wouldn't hand out 10/10 on grammar...but, this is a special text. A whole story, a novel, a prose but in form of poetry. That's why every line matched to compliment in your favor within the grammar. There were no typos and no words that did not make any sense. Sentence structure was fir for poetry and it all flowed nicely. Well done!

Advice and general thoughts: 

First off, I'm sorry for taking this long for the review! Somethings came up and I didn't have the time.  That aside, I have no advice to give you other than keep writing and never stop. I haven't read anything like this on Wp. I loved the experience. I didn't know exactly what to expect, but this was a very nice surprise. I love how unique and different your writing style is. And I applaud your creativity for not only coming up with this plot but also making it a long-lasting poem which tells a story just like a novel, only with rhythmic beat to it. This book deserves a lot more attention.