Temporary Detour
Ace
Summer took a turn differently
than I thought she would. Instead
of streamlining west, we were
going south now. She said that
the detour was only temporary,
that doing this would actually
make this a lot easier on us. I
hoped so. A day or so had
passed. We were getting into Lou-
isiana now, which was some obvious
backtracking from hell. We stopped
in this little bitty motel on the side of
the road. It wasn’t exactly the
prettiest motel I’d ever seen. The
sign proclaimed some pretty low
prices, though, so it was better than
camping out in the truck again.
We made it into the main
lobby. The guy at the desk
smiled at us. Afternoon, ladies.
What can I do for ya?
His accent was fairly thick.
Summer flashed a smile
at him. Well, we were
hoping for a room if that’s
alright. We only need one
bed, so what’s the cheapest
you’ve got that isn’t nasty?
Even while saying all those
things, she still managed to
sound extremely charming.
Well, I got a room that’s
50 bucks a pop for two.
Would you ladies like
that? He grinned.
I smiled. “Sounds nice. We can
handle that.” Lucky for us,
we could. I had an extra $50
from back when I had been
babysitting and saving the
money up for something
big for myself. It would have
to do. I pulled the cash out
from my wallet and handed him
the crisp $50 plus some extra
change to make up for the tax.”
He handed us the key to the
room; Summer took it, and we
quickly settled in once we
got inside. The room was
kind of nice, but certainly not
big. At least there weren’t
roaches everywhere like
some little motels like this
have. I was happy to be
sleeping in a bed again
after being on the road for
so long, now.
Summer kissed me for a
second before sitting down
on her bed. She smiled up
at me and told me I could
take the first shower so
I’d get the most out of the
water. It felt unfair to me,
but she wouldn’t take no.
The shower was pretty
small, but the water was
pretty nice and warm for a
motel shower. The water
ran over my body, washing
away any dirt that I might
have collected while we
were travelling. It felt
fantastic to be so relaxed
again. I’d hoped this
wouldn’t mess up our
current plans thanks to the
stolen vehicles. If we were
lucky, nobody remembered
our faces.
I let those thoughts wash
away, however, and instead
thought of my twin and how
he may be doing. I hadn’t
felt anything lately, but I
hoped he was alright for now.
This was only a temporary
detour, after all.
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Dwindling Light
Teen FictionAce and Jack Sterling, twins, lead very different lives. Ace stayed home with their mother and her terrible lovers; Jack ran away, finding himself a part of a drug chain just to have money to keep a modest subsistence. But Ace wants to get away and...