An Offer to You|COMMENTARY

Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ 3

April 24, 2020

I gave my two cats baths today and one of them literally turned me into her tree and hacked up my arms and sweater. But I can't blame her

So aside from the basic stuff, what I really can't help but notice right off the bat are the pictures. Honestly, I'm a visual type person which is part of the reason I included the picture of Jimin's house, the office where the interview takes place and the dorm room. HOWEVER, another reason was because I WAS TOO LAZY TO ACTUALLY WRITE A PROPER VISUALIZATION/DESCRIPTION ANY OF THEM. I mean, I kind of did for the dorms but NOTHING ELSE. So every time I see the pictures of the rooms (or any picture in the books, for that matter) I DIE A BIT INSIDE. I CAN'T BELIEVE I WAS SO LAZY. I WANT TO PUNCH MYSELF 🥊

When the interview took place, Y'ALL WENT CRAZY WITH THE BLOOD TYPE. LIKE I KNOW I WROTE IT LIKE "(blood type) blood" SO THAT YOU GUYS COULD INCLUDE YOURS BUT SOME OF Y'ALL ARE LIKE "I DON'T KNOW MINE". I'M SORRY BUT IT KILLS ME BECAUSE IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO BE THIS SERIOUS AHAHA.

Now let's skip through the part where Clarisse says offerers have killed each other because they cray-cray (which honestly in real life should indicate that this place IS NOT SAFE) and go to where (Y/n) is brought to the dorm room and has some of the rules of the house explained to her.

Y'all

Have no idea

How much I hate myself

For making the meals happen at specific times.

THAT SHIT WAS IMPOSSIBLE TO STAY TRUE TO AND I HAD TO COME BACK TO THIS CHAPTER SO MANY TIMES IN THE BEGINNING BECAUSE I COULD NOT REMEMBER THAT BREAKFAST WAS AT 9, LUNCH AT 12, AND DINNER AT 6. THIS ABSOLUTE FUCKERY IS UNNECESSARY AND I DON'T KNOW WHY I MADE IT LIKE THIS.

Honestly if I was in this story none of these characters would barely get to share a meal with me because ya girl be waking up at 11 and eating lunch right before 1. Dinner usually happens around 6 so that's the only one where we have a chance.

Also I love how right near the end Clarisse is like "you'll have some chores to do" and then throughout the entire story, (Y/n) be sittin' on her ass doing jack shit.

And then we have Soomi and Miori ending off the chapter. Yay.