An Offer to You|COMMENTARY

Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ 9

May 20, 2020

The prime minister has given me money. I am now $1250 richer 🤑💁‍♀️💅

We now have reached one of the longest chapters in this book. It starts with a GODDAMN PICTURE. Just kidding. But not really 🙃

Anywho, (Y/n) is with Miori and Soomi playing a card game. I'd just like to say I was actually really surprised to hear that so many of you knew what War is. I don't know why but I thought it wasn't a well-known game. Apparently it so tho so 👌

Clarisse eventually interrupts and tells (Y/n) that Jimin needs to see her. She goes to his office (PICTURE 🤢) and he asks if she would be willing to go to a party with him. Our wonderful main character agrees to go with him and is gifted with a dress.

I'd like to apologize because SO MANY OF YOU COMPLAINED THAT YOUR BOOBS ARE TOO SMALL FOR IT. BABES, IT'S OKAY WE CAN JUST PRETEND, YEAH? 🙏

So for some reason I like this chapter? I just remember always enjoying the party part and I have no idea why since it's not particularly interesting? Also as I was reading it I realized I totally forgot what I wrote for the part where they're first arriving at the venue. Like, I had no idea I made photographers be there but apparently they are. And they also serve absolutely no purpose so I don't know why I added them. Pretty random but fUn FaCt.

Once they go in and Jimin tells (Y/n) to get a drink, I literally LAUGHED when he said "I'm gonna find my people". I don't know why I found it so amusing but it just sounds so weird and unnatural 💀. Also a lot of people thought it was BTS members but I, unfortunately, have to inform you that they aren't who he went to find. They were just random people he works with--irrelevant and insignificant peeps 💁‍♀️

So then our MC goes to get a drink and meets our beloved Taehyung 🥰. He makes a comment about smelling Jimin on her. Right before he left, Jimin hugged (Y/n) and said it would help her. Most people realized what he was doing but in case you didn't, he was putting his scent on her to ward off other vampires.

Taehyung wants to dance with (Y/n) and while she's on her way, she bumps into a guy. Eventually Jimin returns to take over Taehyung's place and dances with (Y/n). He makes a comment about her smelling like a werewolf. This is from the man she bumped into. Lots of people thought it was Jungkook but it's not--our lovely JK is also a vampire, as are all the BTS members. Some also thought it was Merric but it's not him either (besides, she looked at the man so if it was him she would've recognized him). This guy also appears near the end of the chapter before (Y/n) and Jimin are about to leave. For now he is insignificant but we will hear about him in a future chapter so keep him in mind 👀

Aside from that, not much happens that's worth commenting on. There's an explanation on vampire and werewolf scents and then (Y/n) and Jimin are leaving. I hadn't realized this while writing but I had a habit of ending the chapters with her passing out and I don't know why 💀. I sincerely apologize for my overflowing creativity. Anyways that's all for this chapter. Ciao!