An Offer to You|COMMENTARY

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October 24, 2020

"Oh, my schedule looks so free, this year is gonna be great! I'm gonna have so much extra time to work on stuff ☺️"

Me: 🤡🎪🤡🎪🤡🎪🤡🎪🤡🎪🤡🎪

I actually fucking hate school. Pretty sure I've cried more times this week alone than I have my entire life. And this shit isn't even over yet, I've got so much crap due in the next week or so 😀. Might just d-word

SO (Y/N) HAS A BABY! CONGRATS GIRL 🥳. OH WAIT NO SHE DIDN'T, I JUST WANTED TO TRICK EVERYONE LOLOLOL.

Soomi is just talking about Jimin, guys. No need to get your panties twisted. No one had a kid and we certainly didn't have that big of a time skip.

Her and (Y/n) sort of go back and forth for a bit about Jimin. So by now, we kinda get the implication that some time has passed since the last chapter. Soomi actually confirms it by saying that (Y/n) and Jimin have been sleeping in the same bed "'for a few weeks--since your accident'".

Speaking of Jimin, we later find out he's been gone FOR 4 FUCKING DAYS. DAMN MAN, YOU REALLY OUT HERE ABANDONING HER LIKE SOLDIERS LEAVING THEIR WIVES TO GO TO WAR IN THE FIRST HALF OF THE 20TH CENTURY.

Also, Soomi is a fat mood. Trying to get (Y/n) and Jimin's sex life going. She wants the smut, too 👀

Celeste and Miori join the party soon after. We also find out that a lot of the girls left? Sounds like only Soomi, Miori and Celeste are staying at Jimin's now. WHEN THE FUCK DO WE GET SOME ANSWERS?

And literally right after I ask that there's a paragraph explaining lmao.

SO.

There are 5 offerers including the 3 musketeers. Jimin told the other girls he and (Y/n) are officially an item and was basically like if you ain't gonna respect, then skedaddle.

It turns out that the reason Jimin is out is he's been having to attended meetings of some sort. Basically, Dylan promised to take full responsibility for Allyson's death but if he did, he didn't want werewolves to be in contact with vampires anymore. So I guess Hoseok won't need to continue trying to be good to him. They also don't want anyone else on werewolf territory anymore. Allyson's parents, however, don't believe that it was just Dylan who did it. Guys, I don't think your daughter would be able to stand up to him. Have you seen him? He's a monster. So don't be shy, just believe the half-truth and drop the subject 🥰

We've got a bit of a thing going on between Celeste and Soomi 👀. Lots of people ship. I do, too. Pretty sure I've mentioned it? But if not, now you know. I know I've mentioned it somewhere at least, whether it was in the second book or while replying to comments. Unfortunately their relationship doesn't expand that much besides what you're given in this epilogue. But just know Celoomi is most definitely real 😌👌 (and we get to see more of them and their slowly developing relationship in the next book 👀)

The lovers' quarrel is interrupted by Clarisse and she comes bearing great news. JIMIN HAS FINALLY RETURNED 🎉. (Y/n) receives some encouraging words from her friends and once again Soomi is trying to get her and Jimin to smash.

(Y/n) rushes to go meet up with her star-crossed lover and when she finally gets there we get MAKE OUT TIME. I don't blame her tho, she hasn't seen him in a few days.

Alright, it kinda started cute but the more I read on, the more steamy it gets and now it's making me uncomfortable PLEASE STOP KISSING YOU TWO. I WANT TO TALK ABOUT SOMETHING ELSE-

So everything turned out great. Allyson's parents finally gave up and decided to believe the claims Dylan made. Jimin is finally free and won't need to disappear anymore (since he had been doing it for quite some time now. It's kinda glossed over but I meant for there to be several of these meetings taking place since Allyson's death where Jimin would leave for the day. This was supposed to be the first time he was gone for consecutive days and couldn't come home at night, tho).

And then suddenly Jimin is drinking from her. Okay then. Guess we're gonna roll with it even though it's LOWKEY KINDA UNNECESSARY. But skip through all that and we have him giving her his blood to heal her wound.

AND THAT'S IT. THAT'S THE END. WOW. WHAT A RIDE THAT WAS.

I'm not done talking yet though so hold your horses.

I need to comment on the whole her being a human situation.

I MESSED UP BIG TIME LMAOOOO. My whole plan was to have it so that when Jimin offered his blood to heal her is when you'd finally realize she's still human. And it's what I used in a "hint" in one of the chapters published after this book was completed since people had been asking if she was a vampire or not.

HOWEVER. I'M A DUMBASS AND DIDN'T REALIZE I ALREADY GAVE IT AWAY. THE AMOUNT OF STUPIDITY I JUST- I DISLIKE MYSELF STRONGLY.

The first is near the beginning when Soomi and (Y/n) are talking about our MC and Jimin sleeping in the same bed. (Y/n) mentions she feels bad because he doesn't need to sleep but stays with her anyways. She thinks he might be bored. Obviously if she was a vampire they wouldn't have this issue since she wouldn't need her beauty rest.

The second, which a lot of people caught onto and I'm SO disappointed I let this slip past me, was in the paragraph explaining how Dylan had been trying to take responsibility for Allyson's death. He also didn't want vampires or humans to go into werewolf territory and my dumbass wrote this line: "'vampires wouldn't be allowed anywhere on the pack's territory, nor would any humans associated with them--such as yourself'".

I COULD SCREAM. I'M SO DUMB AHAHAHA. My younger self was all like "I'm so sneaky. I bet a lot of people won't find out she's human 🤣". Dear my past self, for you >🤡

So yeah, I kinda screwed up my own plans of being a sneaky genius. What a disappointment 🤦‍♀️