An Offer to You|COMMENTARY

Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ 10

May 23, 2020

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The chapter begins with a Jimin carrying (Y/n)'s fat ass into the home.

I'M KIDDING.

But he is carrying her when she wakes up. He says he's gonna bring her to the dorms but she knows it's a bad idea (since the other girls will lose their shit) and decides she doesn't wanna sleep there. He asks where he should take her and there were basically two types of people in the comments: those who wanted him to put her down and those who wanted to go to his room so the two could have sexy time ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

(Y/n) decides she'll sleep in the living room. Now there has only been one person that specifically reached out to me expressing their confusion about the last paragraph before she falls asleep but I thought I would address this anyways. I realize the way I wrote this is a bit...ominous. Like one of the rooms isn't heated as much as other rooms even tho Jimin clearly can afford to do this? What is this tomfoolery?

It was me being a dumbass, that's all. Literally, I was thinking about the seasons when I wrote this and was trying to figure out how to express the changing weather without being explicit. I imagined this particular part of the story taking place at the beginning of fall which is what I meant by "dropping temperature" and "nights getting colder". But I ended up making this sound way more peculiar than it needed to be 💀

(Y/n) is woken up by the cook and ends up having breakfast. Then she makes the brilliant decision to sneak back into the dorms since mOsT oF tHe GiRlS aRe PrObAbLy AsLeEp. But then BOOM. CELESTE IS WAITING. And then she tries asking our heroine where she was as all the other girls become aware of what's happening. And can I just say so many of you were giving this girl SASS. And I'm not judging you at all, in fact a lot of the comments made me laugh.

After trying to hide the real truth, Celeste calls (Y/n) out because THIS GIRL FORGOT SHE WAS WEARING HER SUPER FANCY CINDERELLA DRESS. THERE GOES YOUR PLAN OF KEEPING THE NIGHT A SECRET, (Y/N) 🙄

AND THEN.

THE MOMENT.

YOU KNOW WHAT IT IS.

Soomi tried to break it up and CELESTE THROWS A MF KNIFE AT HER. SHE WENT ASSASSIN MODE. Don't get me wrong, I love Celeste (as I've stated) and she's a whole ass boss bitch for being able to use knives 😍 BUT THIS CAME OUT OF NOWHERE AND I WAS LITERALLY DYING. I DIDN'T REALIZE HOW OUT OF THE BLUE IT WAS. THIS IS SO BAD 💀. All of your reactions are PRICELESS tho *chef's kiss*.

So then (Y/n) finally decides to tell the truth and doesn't seem to understand the concept of leaving something to the imagination. This bitch does NOT hesitate to tell the itty bitty details of her and Jimin's secret rendezvous (my past French teachers are QUAKING 💅). One of the other girls does not appreciate and ATTACKS OUR MC. Clarisse comes in at just the right time, Celeste starts being fake and the assaulter is being a crybaby. Clarisse gains some fans when she's all like "I don't care about you, dumb bitch. Mr. Park is gonna whoop your ass" and Celeste leaves to get food (whole ass mood, btw).

Jimin comes to collect the girl and the chapter ends with her shrieks and pleas before a door slams. Suddenly this book has turned into a horror movie.