An Offer to You|COMMENTARY

Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ 20

June 30, 2020

72/73 days later and the packages have arrived, people. Thank you for joining me on this epic adventure ♥︎

Damn apparently at the time this chapter came out, this book had reached 5k reads. I remember being so happy at the time and now look where this crap book has gotten :,). Obviously I'm eternally grateful for the support either way but there are so many better books out there 😅

So. Silver. Coming out of Jimin. Not good. RIP him.

And wow, Allyson is the one that injected it. Very cool. Also, I really got all of y'all with Jimin's "'I need you'" followed by the "'Get me my phone'". AHAHAHA many people were excited for a second 😈😈😈. He's dying guys, get your minds out of the gutter. Now is not the time 🤨

(Y/n) needs help from one of the other guys so she ends up choosing to go with Yoongles. He makes a joke about Jimin always tripping and DAMN. SOMEONE REALLY FOUND A BUNCH OF GIFS OF JIMIN FALLING AND PUT THEM IN THE COMMENTS. THE DEDICATION 👏

Anyway, (Y/n) explains to Yoongi it's actually serious and that Jimin's got silver in him. So he tells her to get Jimin's needle and then look at what she's dealing with. Surprisingly, she describes it as not being too bad and that only a thumbtack is in the wound. But when she takes it out SIKE. This thing is actually A BITCH MURDERING WEAPON OF SATAN (I don't even know what that means but we're rolling with it).

Not gonna lie, I was and still am quite proud of this creation 😌

Basically, it has the head of a thumbtack but there's a long, thick needle-like blade attached to it. And to make matters worse, there are jagged bits of knives sticking out of the length, resembling a rose stem. So when you shove it into someone, obviously it's gonna do a lot more damage. But taking it out is worse because the parts sticking out will catch on skin and make it impossible to take out without ripping and tearing it up. It was never stated in the story, but I had always imagined that the sharp bits sticking out were slightly angled towards the head, sorta like a vector anchor? So yeah, it's gonna get stuck and you'll really need to pull to get it out. And I've just realized that's not a pretty picture to put in your minds but IMAGERY 😍

Next, we've got more pain for Jimin. Time to suck the silver out with the needle 🤩. Although really, it's better than leaving the silver in.

Once that toxic shit is out of him, Jimin is quick to try and get (Y/n) to hang up. But Yoongi is all like "stop right there bitch, I ain't done with you yet". Jimin must drink blood, doesn't matter from who but since (Y/n) is there it'd be most convenient. The silver is in his bloodstream and he needs to flush it out however, the exact amount isn't specified. So Jimin is worried he'll end up sucking her dry. Doesn't mean it's bound to happen but it's a possibility.

Also, love how people were so quick to say to get Celeste or Laura 💀. BUT if he didn't drink all their blood (because again, he might not need to suck them dry) and instead they had a bonding moment where one of them saved his life, then what? 👀

Yoongi eventually hangs up after giving his wise advice and making sure Jimin will get blood in some way. So (Y/n) does her best to convince Jimin to use her, putting her trust in him and reassuring him that nothing will go wrong. She manages to get through to him and he takes the offer. We have soft but weirdly intimate blood-drinking time and just when MC is about to pass away, Jimin stops. He does, indeed, have self-control, people 😌. A round of applause for Jimin 👏

Jimin throws himself against the wall for a bit because he's obsessed with them. No, but for real, manz keeps doing it and I'm slightly concerned. People pointed out that it's like that scene from Twilight after Edward is kissing Bella in her room and just...yeah. Exactly like that. Only Jimin does it 2X for some reason.

(Y/n) has to stop Jimin from beating himself up because he doesn't like that he barely managed to stop drinking her blood before she passed out. Soft moments between them and then tImE sKiP. Jimin wants to feed her (feeding kink? 😏) because she's about to die from blood loss (not literally, I'm being dramatic). While they're going to the kitchen there is a knock at the door. Jimin decides to answer it and-

BOOM. A BITCH HAS APPEARED. AND THIS TIME SHE DOESN'T WANT JIMIN BUT INSTEAD (Y/N). GaSp. PLOT TWIST ALLYSON LOVES HER.

Not actually, Allyson wants to give her to someone else (👀) but for now, MC must GET THE FUCK OUT OF THERE. So she tries to run upstairs because yes, that's definitely where you go when you're trying to escape someone. To the second floor where there's no way to get out except jumping from a window and resulting in two broken ankles. Very nice. Could've run down the hall or something and gone out the back door but alright.

Before she gets up the stairs, she notices Laura at the top of the staircase. (Y/n) tries to get her to run too because they are in DaNgEr but Laura is all like hell nah. Confused heroine watches as she starts muttering to herself while lifting her hand and OOF. PAIN IN HEAD. Because Laura is a WITCH (read: bitch).

And yeah, she uses her powers to kill (Y/n). The end.

(Jk)