An Offer to You|COMMENTARY

Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ 18

June 23, 2020

So some clothes I ordered on April 20th finally showed up today 😃

Now I've just gotta wait for the other 3 things I ordered APRIL 19TH AND 18TH AND WE'LL BE FINE AND DANDY 🥰😃

First of all, I hate the picture in the chapter. I fucking edited it and the purpose was to just give him red eyes but somewhere throughout the process my dumbass put on a filter and now this boy looks like Casper the ghost. I hate whitewashing with a passion. I don't know what my younger self was thinking.

Anyways, (Y/n) wakes up and everyone's acting a little strange, a bit fidgety y'know. Turns out someone wrote "wHoRe" in blood on the curtains of her bed 😃. Very nice, we love to see it.

Celeste appears out of nowhere and (Y/n), thinking it was her who's the culprit, gets angry at her. She admits she did the dirty work of putting it on the curtain but someone else came up with the idea.

Some jealous bitch named Laura says it's because (Y/n) forced Jimin to take her blood. Which, in fairness, isn't far from the truth. But do we need to call her a whore and make a big scene about it? Like damn, y'all got issues 🙄

Now that she's feeling a bit embarrassed under the stares of all the other girls, MC and her besties go to momma Clarisse for help. Like the sweetheart she is, she says they'll have the curtains cleaned and decides she's going to take the heroine out for the day.

I noticed that a few people were a bit suspicious of Clarisse. All I have to say is HOW DARE YOU. CLARISSE IS BEST GIRL. OR WOMAN. YOU MUST TRUST HER 😤

While the two are in the store, they spilt up to do their own things. Not too long after TAEHYUNG ARRIVES. YES BABY 😩. Obviously he's a bit concerned at first, thinking she came out alone. Like bitch, Jungkook was attacked what are you doing out here where Allyson or Merric could get you (👀wink wink👀). But (Y/n) assures him she's with Clarisse and explains her morning incident to him.

Tae still isn't too fond of the idea, thinking Merric (👀) or Allyson could come out of nowhere and attack. (Y/n) reassures him that she's in a public space where she can easily call for help and is confident that Merric wouldn't try to hurt her anyway. And like yeah, if Merric did for whatever reason try to kidnap or harm her, she could scream and it'd be over. But bitch, Allyson can swoop in and teleport away with you in the blink of any eye sooooo what's your plan then?

To pacify him, she promises to go back to Clarisse so that way someone else is watching her at all times. Taehyung reluctantly agrees and then leaves soon after. As she goes back to shopping, Taehyung comes back and then-

SURPRISE MOTHERFUCKER. IT'S ACTUALLY MERRIC.

The man is here to take her away. (Y/n) isn't happy with him, especially not after what he did to Jungkook, claiming he's innocent and shouldn't have been brought into this fight (which I completely agree with 😤👍. Hate fucking hostage situations where you use innocents for leverage, as I have already mentioned).

To Merric, Jungkook isn't so innocent tho. He's a killer. And yeah, he is, to be perfectly honest. Jungkook is a vampire. He kills people and drinks their blood. But werewolves kill vampires so they're not Saints either. And (Y/n), once again, makes a good point when she tells Merric to be the better man and stop the fighting between their species instead of using their history as an excuse to hate them and continue to hunt their kind. I get that history is important but you shouldn't be using it as an excuse to attack a dude. And it's not like Jungkook did anything to him first, he just existed 😑

Merric, growing frustrated, threatens to take (Y/n) by force since she's not letting him explain himself. MC goes on this huge rant about how he should be letting her make her own decisions, which is actually what the "bloodsuckers" are letting her do, and just YAS. PREACH. FUCK HIM UP GIRL. AND THEN WE GET THE "'Yeah, keep rolling your eyes. Maybe you'll find a brain back there'" LINE. THE SASS 💁‍♀️ 💅. WE LOVE 🤩

But then Merric reveals his actual plan. Because taking by force didn't necessarily apply to (Y/n). He was actually referring TO OUR CLARISSE. BRUH. I HAVE LOST ALL RESPECT FOR YOU. WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT HOSTAGE SITUATIONS?

After accusing him of being a shitbag, (Y/n) runs off to find her adoptive mother. She quickly finds her and it turns out she's been "'hit on the head really hard'" and "'It'll be fine'". Bitch I think the fuck not.

In order to get help, MC needs to call Jimin. It's a pretty uneventful call BUT right at the end it ends with "'Good girl. I promise I will'". The number of dog comments there are 💀. Like damn, none of y'all got a praise kink? Then again this never was supposed to be taken too seriously but I'm shocked by how many people in the comments are seen sharing the same brain cell 💀. There are still several kinky comments tho and I had fun reading those ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Jimin shows up not too long after and someone in the comments mentioned about whether he knew the location and all I have to say is SHHHHHH. ʜᵉ ʲᵘˢᵗ ᵏⁿᵒʷˢ ᵒᵏᵃʸ😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉?

Also yes, all the staff in the store are legally blind and didn't see shit 🥰👩‍🦯