An Offer to You|COMMENTARY

Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀ 14

June 12, 2020

Got more money from the government 🤑💸💸💸💸

The chapter kicks off with (Y/n) returning to the dorms to tell Miori and Soomi about what happened. They find out Jimin drank from her and that she's no longer a "blood virgin"(?) if we can call her that. But anyways, Miori tells her to go to the nurse to get it checked out because INFECTION BAD and the wrapping is a bit bulky and noticeable. And right when (Y/n) is about to hide her wound CELESTE GRABS HER WRIST 😱. AW SHIIIT.

Celeste is like "hmm, pretty suspicion 🤔" and (Y/n) is like "you must be on something because there ain't no problem here". Celeste isn't about to back down so (Y/n) decides to flee the scene. As she's running down the stairs and reaches the 1st floor she runs into someone and is sent falling onto her ass.

WE FINALLY GET TO MEET OUR SUNSHINE, WORLDWIDE HANDSOME AND KOOKIE! EVERYONE SCREAM!

Celeste gets scared off by them (thank God) so (Y/n) is left with a sausage fest. Then we get proper introductions from everyone. Seokjin's is fine, no issues there. Although I noticed that a few people in the comments referred to him as "eomma" and imma have to ask you to not do that. If you're confused please go to the sequel book (Yours for Eternity) and read that chapter named "PLEASE READ! VERY IMPORTANT", thank you very much. Jungkook's was also perfectly normal. But in Hoseok's we have the stage name again and I cringed 💀

Turns out the 3 musketeers have heard about (Y/n) from Joonie and Yoongles and they also know about the Merric situation. There's this weird little part where they confirm that (Y/n) hAs Now MeT aLl Of JiMiN's FrIeNdS. They finally mention that they're here for Jimin and our MC tells them he's doing work. Also, I only saw one comment on this particular chapter (I think there might be more in future ones?) talking about that fact Jungkook didn't use the honorific "hyung" when he asked where Jimin was. I feel like I should just clear something up because 16-year-old me might've confused a lot of you.

The boys are all, of course, Korean but I didn't envision the story taking place there. I imagined it being in America or anywhere that isn't Korea, for that matter. All of them speak in English for the most part (there's an exception in an upcoming chapter). Jungkook (or any of the other members when speaking to another who is older than them) only uses "hyung" when addressing another member when he's not paying attention to (Y/n), if that makes sense. When they speak to her directly about one another, they won't use the honorific. I just saw it as being weird if they start using Korean terms when talking with her even tho she knows nothing about the language, y'know? It's like if some Japanese person living in America went up to one of their American friends and was all like "oh yeah, John-kun told me this", or "Melanie-chan wants that". It's weird.

And then...oh boy. That line appears. That line.

Jimin is very no fun.

I want to go punch 16-year-old me, rip out her hair, toss her in a ditch, fill it with cement, and let her decompose.

Let me just make this clear: I hate the jokes from 2014, ESPECIALLY the no jams one. If you like them and still use them then...I have nothing to say. Just know that I'm silently judging you but don't take it personally. I just loath those jokes--they're so fucking overused they aren't funny to me anymore. ESPECIALLY. THE. NO JAMS. ONE.

And actually even tho I said I wouldn't say anything, I would kindly advise you to use that joke with...caution? If you like it? I read somewhere that there's a likely chance Jimin doesn't like the joke since Namjoon actually made the effort to make a video on their channel with Chim claiming he does, in fact, have jams. There wouldn't be a need to do so if Jimin didn't mind the joke so yeah. Please take this into consideration. There's a chance he could feel insecure about the whole thing or something.

Back to the story, it seems the three guys are here to give Jimin some news. Literally 2 seconds later, the man of the hour appears and all the vampires leave our heroine. She then decides to go to the nurse to get her arm looked at.

We have a little time skip and (Y/n) is just finishing dinner when she runs into Jimin (she seems to have a habit of bumping into people 🤨). She tells Jimin about getting her wrist fixed up and then they have this little moment where she's all like "babe, stop feeling guilty. I wanted you to bite me. Let's do it again sometime 🥴".

(Y/n) asks about the news Jimin was given and WhOa He SeEmS uPsEt AbOuT iT. Even tho she reassured him he doesn't have to tell her, Jimin wants his blood bag to know the shit that's about to go down. And the chapter ends with him revealing Allyson's return. Oh, how so many of you were thrilled by this ☺️