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1) MARJAAVAN- Ishq mein maarenge bhi...marenge bhi by miss__confused
Cover- 9.5/10
Your cover is awesome. I loved your editing skills. 0.5 marks cutted for your username which is not clear.Title- 10/10
Your title is perfect. It perfectly suits with your story. It gives a rough image of story.Blurb- 8/10
Your blurb is well written but little short too. I will suggest you to add more dialogue from the story to make it attractive.Writing style and Grammar 9.5/10
I have only read five chapter. So I find your writing style is nice and easy to understand and I didn't find any grammatical errors.Plot- 10/10
The plot is unique one. I had never across a story in mishbir fandom in wattpad in which mishti can't speak and abir is goon. So it is definitely interesting for me and reader too.Character development- 14/15
As I said above I only read 5 chapters. So in this chapters I find character development is going smooth.Hook- 10/10
The story is very interesting. Abir is very educated then why he is goon. If Nawaz is Hindu and Hopi is Muslim then why they changed their religion. This are the main points which hooked me in story.Does the author followed you- 10/10
Overall Impression- 14/15
One marks deduced for the blurb which could have more better. Otherwise all story points are awesome.Total 95/100
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2) Because destiny has its own plans by RekhaMittal
Cover- 9.5/10
The cover is beautiful!! It suits the story very well. You had great choice in choosing the cover.Title- 10/10
The title suits with your story. This title gives you a rough image of story and title is unique too.Blurb- 10/10
The blurb is awesome. It gives me press the read button fast specially the blurb. I truly love the blurb.Writing style and Grammar- 8/10
Your writing style is nice but in first chapter is confusing too. The dialogue are well written. There is only one or two grammatical errors.Plot- 8/10
Plot is awesome. It is definitely better than the original Kausati Zindagi ki. I loved that prerna stands for herself and her child. I really like when female protoganist is strong not weak.
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