🤖Mystery/Thriller - @Miss_Confused_Soul🤖

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Be-lie-Ve by laailaaa_
Cover :- 9.5 / 10
The cover is really nice...I appreciate your editing skills but it is not having your username

Title :- 10 / 10
The title is perfect...it really suits story line & it gives a rough image of story

Blurb :- 8 / 10
Blurb is nice but you should add some dialogues to make it interesting

Writing style & grammar :- 9 / 10
Your writing style is perfect 👍 And there are only 4-5 mistakes which can be corrected in just 5 mins

Plot & Hook :- 15 / 15
The plot is very unique & amazing Boy narrating the story & everything is also happening in real life... It's really really interesting I loved it.

Truly....I read it in one go...you did it perfectly....not giving reason to readers to lost interest

Character development :- 14 / 15 Characters development is perfect specially that unknown boys...it's really mysterious

Increased your curiosity? : 5/5
It increased my curiosity very much.

Does the author followed you ??? 10/10

Overall impression :- 14.5 / 15
This book is really amazing...very interesting very mysterious..but only 1 to 3 mistakes which I mentioned above...leaving that it's perfect

Total :- 95/100

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His Destructive Obsession by its_anki

Cover :- 10/10
The cover is perfect....it gives a glimpse of story

Title :- 10 / 10
The title is nice....it perfectly suits the story

Blurb :- 8 / 10
Blurb is good but I think you should add some dialogues

Writing style & grammar :- 6 / 10
I found only 5-6 mistakes but I think you should work on your writing style

Plot & Hook :- 12 / 15
I love the plot....it's really nice Everytime I read it...only question comes Is " what will happen in end ??? Will avni escape ??? Will Neil will ever realise his mistake ??? "

Hook is good but sometimes we already get to know what will happen next....which makes it little boring. 

Character development :- 13 / 15
Avni's Character development is good but niel's character is little fast

Increased your curiosity? : 5/5
It was really interesting... You really increased my curiosity level.

Does the author followed you ??? 10 / 10

Overall impression :- 13.5 / 15
Overall it's a nice book...but as I said above sometimes it gets boring & sometimes we already got to know what will happen next

Total :- 87.5/100

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The flame of love by Aditidas1994

Cover :- 7/10
It's nice but I would suggest you to request for a cover in any cover shop available On wattpad

Title :- 5 / 10
According to me...this doesn't suits the story...

Blurb :- 7 / 10
It's too short...you should add something in it

Writing style & grammar :- 10 / 10
Your writing style is perfect...not a single mistake in story

Plot & Hook :- 12/15
Plot is amazing...it's unique it have never readed any book on this topic on wattpad

It's good but the problem is sometimes reader lost interest in it and It becomes boring

Character development :- 13 / 15
Parul's character was perfect but his brother & fathers is little slow

Increased your curiosity? : 3/5
I didn't get much curious.

Does the author followed you  10  / 10

Overall impression :- 12 / 15
It's an really nice book with an nice plot...but sometimes boring too

Total :- 79/100

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Into the night by Rhage007

Cover :- 9.5/10
The cover suits the story well but your username is missing

Title :- 10 / 10
Title is perfect...it goes with story

Blurb :- 5.5 / 10
Blurb is short plus it isn't attractive Readers aren't getting curious after reading it

Writing style & Grammar :- 10 / 10
Your writing style & Grammar is perfect...it's amazing not a single mistake

Plot & Hook :- 7/15
Plot is good but not much...little boring

Hook : It's not good...in few it's interesting but suddenly it becomes boring & story becomes slow

Character development :- 14 / 15 Everyone's character was developing well but in middle it becomes really slow

Increased your curiosity? : 2/5
I was curious but not that much.

Does the author followed you 10 / 10

Overall impression :- 9 / 15
Like mentioned below Sometimes really boring sometimes interesting...story is slow which makes ppl loose their patience & leave story

Total :- 77/100

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The definition of love by animasikku

Cover :- 10 / 10
The cover is perfect..👍it suits the story very well

Title :- 9 / 10
Well title is good..but it can be better

Blurb :- 8 / 10
Your Blurb is perfect...it attracts me & force me to click on read option fast

Writing style & grammar :- 7 / 10
Your writing style is good but there are some grammatical mistakes... Please correct it or give this book to any editing shop...who can do this for you

Plot & Hook :- 12.5 / 15
Your Plot is awesome & much better than original Naamkaran show I really love the way Neil stands for avni & sometimes fights with her mom too I really love when Male character takes stand for her partner

Sometimes it became boring but after 1 to 2 chapter...it became interesting again

Character development :- 12 / 15 Everything was nice till 4th chapter but after that....I found it fast... It would be better if you kept it little slow & smooth

Increased your curiosity? : 4/5
Your precaps, promos increased my curiosity level, but sometimes it couldn't.

Does the author followed you ??? 10 / 10

Overall impression :- 11.5 / 15
I like it but as I said characters were developing fastly & Also it affects story line...it becomes boring sometime

Total :- 84/ 100

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