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Book name : The forgotten memory 

Author name : SamEl145

COVER : 10/10 
Cover is good simple yet it says many things also the quote is very nice 

TITLE : 10/10 
Completely defines the plot readers could get a rough idea of your story .. good one .. 

BLURB : 8/10 
The blurb was nice but felt to long .. but the good part was you have given a small note so that your readers don't get confused where the story is going on .. 

PLOT : 10/10 

Uniqueness : 7/10

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT : 15/15 
I love the way you gave each character it's space .. they actually developed nicely .. each character was introduced perfectly .. loved the bond of your lead and his friend … its lovely .. 

DID THE AUTHOR FOLLOWED YOU : Yes 10/10 

WRITING STYLE AND GRAMMAR : 8/10 : writing style is smooth and very nice but will suggest you to enhance it … didn't found any grammatical errors it's good 

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
The book really impressed me … the twist and turns of the story keeps hook up .. but as is said use a good vocabulary to enhance your story .. rest is all perfect .. 

TOTAL : 92/100 

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Book Name : Wherever you go 

Author name : SumitJena2099

Cover : 8/10 
Cover is good … but need more relatable to the title 

Title : 10/10 
Title was good suits completely to your story .. 

BLURB : 6 /10 
The blurb was good but very long .. instead giving long you could have add short dialouges to keep your readers curiosity towards the story .. 

Plot : 7/10 
Plot seems very nice and mysterious  but at some points I felt it is going fast .. and bit confusing .. 

Uniqueness : 9/10 

Character development : 13/15 
Character developed very well but at some points I felt I can't connect with them .. 

Did Author follwed you : yes 10/10 

Writing  style & Grammar : 8/10 
Writing style is good but felt lacking of good vocab .. Grammatical errors were there so would suggest you to correct it 

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