I am gonna explain some of my thoughts on the story.
I keep forgetting that this story is a rough draft and that their is a lot that I want to change. As I'm nearing the end of this story, I realized that there were some subplots that I have neglected, such as Lia learning to become more independent. I still want Lia to be vulnerable (because I am a sucker for damsels in distress) but I want her to grow and learn that she doesn't want to be pushed around so easily. You may have saw some changes in her character in the chapter Secret.
I also see some chapters that are fillers and don't drive any of the plots forward, so I'll be deleting and writing chapters that move the story forward.
Some people who read this tend to get confused about some details and that is because I added it on the spot and it either needs to be removed or included in other parts of the story to help it become clear.
I didn't want to get too deep into this but I just felt like this story really needs some editing and I thought I'd share some of what my plans are with you guys. If I explain any more, it would be more along the line of spoilers.
Also, please feel free to critique the story, good or bad. I am really passionate with this story and I love reading your comments. I read every single one of your comments. They mean so much to me!
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR SUPPORT!!!
The next chapter is in the making. Prepare for violence! :p
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Her Wendigo Chapter 2
Romance"So its just us now..." Damian rested his head atop of her small knees and softly wheezed a small purr. Lia tried her best to keep the tears from her eyes as she traced the cracks on Damian's skull. Despite how turmoiled she was it was soothing to f...
