Review done - by Anonymous4257
Title 10/10, The tile fits the story well, considering that it is what the story is about. I also like how you invented a fictional town to use as your setting. Many people struggle with this or don't have the imagination for it, but you made it work!
Cover 7/10, I'm personally not a fan of animated covers when it comes to teen fiction, etc. it makes it look child-like in my opinion. I also think that the cover in general looks dull and boring.
Blurb 10/10, The blurb was great! You have just enough information, without giving too much away. It's eye-catching, intriguing, and makes me want to read more.
Spelling&Punctuation 19/20, There are only a few punctuation errors, and I haven't noticed any misspellings. This book seems to be carefully and almost professionally written.
Plot 18/20, The plot of your story is great! I haven't noticed any plot holes, the storyline is intriguing, I definitely wanted to keep reading your book, and who knows—I might. But, I would definitely be more mindful when you're describing things. In some places, you describe WAY too much, and in others, you don't describe enough.
Character Development 10/10, I noticed a lot of character development. You really got to see Ev grow and change. She started kind of timid, and even shy. But after moving to her new school, you get to watch those characteristics slowly shift into something remarkable. Not only that, but you also write her in a lot of scenes with her friend, which helps us see that side of her as well.
Originality 10/10, Your story is so original and different from anything that I've ever read before. It's not cliche or typical. Which is a good thing.
Writing Flow 10/10, Your story was so easy to read, and everything was so beautifully written. I didn't only like your story, but I was also captivated by the way that you wrote it as well. It's very inspiring.
The overall score is 94/100
Overall review: As I mentioned before, I feel like you did describe too much about things that weren't as important, and you left us in the dark with things that we were itching to know. Such as the Alpha and Omega classes etc. you didn't explain much about those things. Every time you wrote the word 'it's' you left out the comma. That is the only punctuation error that I noticed, but you made that error repetitively.
Other than the things that I mentioned, your story has so much potential, and I really enjoyed reading it. Everything came together so naturally. Nothing looked rushed or out of place. You're very talented. And to receive a review like this from me, even I'm astonished. I don't normally give out really nice reviews. I'm honest, and I'm being honest when I say that you should never give up on writing.
YOU ARE READING
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