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My sister, it's Asteria

I can feel it but she's not in her body it's like death fight in front of me

If I wasn't positive she was death I am now

She then just stands there as her body just absorbs McGonagalls spell doing nothing to her but she throws the spells at the Currow twins

Chaos everywhere. Flitwick and the rest of the staff put up their wands but Pansy and Fred scream for them to lower their wands

"STOP SHES ON OUR SIDE" Fred screams

"THATS ASTERIA PUT YOUR WANDS DOWN YOU IDIOTS OR ILL KILL YOU ALL" Pansy demanded

While Fred was nice Pansy was murderous it was a nice balance

When McGonagall stops firing at Asteria she realizes it does nothing and Asteria changes back and we all see that gorgeous dress I remember the first time I saw that was after she came back from detention with Pansy

"Wow been a long time" she starts to twirl and then she looks at Severus "I didn't leave you alive because the goodness of my heart"

Wow that was harsh but Fred is looking at her like every hope and dream he's had came true all in this moment

I can see him already picturing holding her again and having the girls meet her and them being together it looks like he's come back to life

"I assumed the dark deadly figure wouldn't have good intentions" Severus says wow also harsh

"My intentions are cruel evil murder and revenge and you have information I need" he looks at her very serious

"about... the child?" She nods and I can see pain in her eyes

"Fine" Asteria claps her hands like an evil villain "good I thought I'd have to torture you for it" he looks confused but nods he then slowly smiles at her "im glad your free" she looks at him with respect

"Makes one of us"

He looks down "im sorry for what happened" she then leans in and hugs him "thank you, your one of the few to say that and know what happened"

Im so confused

Is she on his side

Did he say child before

"now get out of here or I'll drag you"

What child? I look to the others to see if I'm the only one confused

Did Severus and my sister have a child together

Just then the torches go out as they go out in the line on the wall the smoke is all that is seen before the Hall is set into total darkness.

Students scream

Tyler seems nervous and I thought he'd be more happy to see Asteria

Instantly, the torches burst back to life and we see that it's McGonagall, wand raised aloft, who's done it. In the moonlight, we can see a Bat like creature beating into the night.

Professor McGonagall looks livid "Coward! COWARD! And he didn't even stay to fight!" She looks at Asteria her dark dress hasn't disappeared yet she must still be angry

Fred still looks overjoyed to see her. The same as Pansy. Luna looks at both worried. She told them about how Asteria was and to not force to much on her at once that even noises made her flinch.

I see Asteria look at Tyler and I see anger fill her face

But McGonagall speaks "Mr. Potter, do you mind telling me what you're doing here, which, I trust you realize, is an act of complete and utter lunacy?"
Harry seems to be looking between Asteria and McGonagall wanting to speak to both "I'm a Gryffindor"