CHAPTER EDITED
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Outer Voice: Denith: "Hello!"
Inner Voice: Denith: 'Hello!'
Actions: *Introduces himself*
Character introductions: [Denith]
Setting Swaps: ----------
4th Wall Breaks/Swaps ~~~~~~~~~
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Back at the motel, Denith had brought everyone back with him, how they were all going to fit in one room was currently the question of the hour.
Denith: "WHAT DO YOU MEAN 200 POKE!!!"
Breloom: "You should know my prices don't change by now."
Denith: "Goddamnit. Look, I just saved these guys from a laboratory doing unethical experiments, can't I just catch a break and have a suite room?"
Breloom: "With no disrespect, that sounds like a major you problem."
Denith: "How does one say "no disrespect" then insult you not even a second later?"
Aur: "Sir, would you please lessen the prices on a room, pleaseeee" *Baby doll eyes*
Breloom stared back with a deadpan face.
Breloom: "150."
Denith and Aura both gasped.
Aur: "Really?"
Breloom: "No. Pay up or get out."
Denith: "Can we at least get separate rooms?"
Breloom: "No, it's better to have clients stick in one room. Leaves more space."
Denith: "Hm, you're lucky I find your soullessness strangly charming."
Breloom: "Compliments don't pay my bills."
Denith takes out 200 poke and places it on the table.
Breloom: "Room 403 don't forget it."
Denith: "No promises."
Breloom: "Heh."
Denith, Xi, Aur, and Alfred all walk up to room 403.
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Xi lays down on a cushion that was put on the floor
Xi: "Ah~ It's been so long since I've had something comfy to lay on..."
Denith sits in front of Xi.
Denith: "You comfy?"
Denith's reply was the soft snoring of Xi.
Denith: *chuckle* 'Fair enough.'
Aur was getting ready to sleep on a bed, while Alfred was at the dresser, looking through the file of Syndicate owned places.
Denith: "Uh, what are you doing?"
Alfred: "They may have gotten me down once, but now I'm back and better than ever. I'm not going to stop going after then till one of us is gone."
Denith: "...Because of your wife?"
Alfred: "Huh? How do you know about that?"
Denith: "I spoke to Tres Kantós. Or Dos, at the time. They told me what had happened."
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