CHAPTER EDITED
Please Read This. The story won't make sense otherwise.
Outer Voice: Denith: "Hello!"
Inner Voice: Denith: 'Hello!'
Actions: *Introduces himself*
Character introductions: [Denith]
Setting Swaps: ----------
4th Wall Breaks/Swaps ~~~~~~~~~
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Leaf: "Wow! The island is huge! Everything looks so advanced."
Frank: "Of course, the entire island is like a nation."
Xi: "Wow, Look at all the Pokemon here Denith."
Xi had really come out of his shell since he first met Denith. It was nice seeing him like this.
Denith: "I know right? This is an introverts nightmare."
Rin: "Axel, Sunshine, Stay close okay?"
Axel: "Okay."
Sunshine: "Aye!"
Brian: "So, where's the place we're staying at? More importantantly can it fit all of us?"
Frank: "I have a beach house on this island. We'll stay there till we go back home."
Bolt: "So what now?"
Frank: "It says there's something they call a train. There wasn't one before."
Trace: "They're a mode of transportation that use an engine to power wheels on a track."
Robert: "It's a bit more complex than that, but we'd be here all day if we got into details."
Denith: 'Somethings missing... No. Someone's missing. Where's Cc?'
Denith waited for some kind of sign that she was coming, but nothing happened. Everyone just moved along to the train station.
Denith: '...Ok.'
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Everyone had arrived at the beach house. Everyone, (Denith in particular) was surprised at the size.
Blaze: "Wow, this is your beach house?"
Frank: "Yes."
Denith: "This does not look cheap."
Frank: "It wasn't that expensive."
They all entered, mesmerized at the inside as well.
Mollie: "This is amazing. The ocean is a nice view."
Frank: "Would you all mind helping me clean the place? It's filled with dust."
Both Jolteon's eyes were sparkling with excitement for some reason.
Speed/Bolt: "Seriously!?"
Frank: "What's up with those eyes?"
Speed/Bolt: "This is gonna be fun."
Rin: "Save the cleaning for later! We have a beautiful beach here after all!"
Silvia/Crystal/Tarakona: "Let's go!"
Aur: "Oh joy, there's three now."
Speed and Bolt were offended that no one else wanted to clean.
Frank: "I guess we can clean it later. Wanna go down there?"
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Eeveelution Squad: Denith Edition
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