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Chapter 17
Once we had our shoes on we went back into the kitchen and Monica got ready to take us to Galactia.
“Everyone ready?” Monica asked.
“Yah”, Ben and I said while Mom said “Yes.”
“Good let’s go!” Monica said and she waved her finger around in a circle above her head and we vanished from the kitchen and into a magic portal. There we floated for about a minute and then we appeared on some grass in Galactia, right in front of the palace.
“This way please.” Monica said and she started leading us into the palace. The palace was huge. It was made of white rock and had a white rock wall going all the way around it. There had to be at least twenty five steps up to the front door and when we got to the top of the steps a door man bowed and let us into a big white hall.
“This place is just how I remembered it”, I heard Mom whisper and Ben just kept “oohing” and “ahhing”.
Once we got to the end of the hall Monica lead us into another hall way and stopped us in front of a big door.
“This is the living room, Your Majesties.” She said with a big smile and opened the door to lead us in. Once we were in she closed the door and motioned for us to sit down. Then she walked into another side room. When she came back she had a big tray of cookies and milk.
Then the door opened and in walked… Our dad!
“Dad! Ben and I shouted and ran right into his arms.
“Hannah! Ben! Stephanie! How good to see you all. Thank you Monica. You may go now”, Dad said and Monica left the room.
It had been almost a decade since I’d seen him. He looked so much taller and young yet. Most men wouldn’t have been but my dad did because he’s a vampire, remember?
“Dad what happened? Why did you leave us? Are you going to be able to come back home with us?” I asked dad while Ben pelted him with different questions.
“Slow down. Slow down. I can’t understand either one of you”, Dad said and the went over to Mom and gave her a big hug.
“So when do you have to leave?” Mom asked.
“In three days”, he said disappointed, “But that leaves me with one day to be with you guys, one day to get everything ready, and one day to get to the war camp in Nayvite.”
“Okay then that’s good”, Mom said taking in the info.
“Hey kids why don’t I get Monica to take you to your rooms and you guys can get used to the new surroundings while I get your mom ready for ruling” Dad said and got up, walked over to a rope on the wall and Monica walked in a few moments later.
“Yes, Your Majesty?” Monica said once she was inside the room.
“Monica, can you please show Ben and Hannah to their rooms?” Dad asked, “I got some things to do with Stephanie and Ben, Hannah don’t be afraid to trying anything on or go into town. You got your abilities that can help you if you need help”, Dad said and then whispered to Mom, “They do have their abilities yet, right?”
“I don’t know yet. There hasn’t been any signs that I’ve seen”, Mom whispered back.
“Kids you do have your abilities yet, right?” Dad asked getting concerned.
“Like what kind of abilities…” Ben and I asked at the same time.
“Abilities like… wings, fangs, turning into bats, being able to communicate telepathically, invisibility, and supper speed”, Mom said stepping forward. Then Ben and I looked at each other and I slowly spread my wings while Ben turned into a bat. Well that must have surprised them because their eyes went wide. I mean really wide, almost like their eyes were going to pop out of their heads.
“Oh my, Victor! Look!” Mom said as if she was too scared to even speak.
“I know Stephanie. Monica, please”, Dad said and then Monica seemed to snap out of a stare like Mom and Dad’s and then she ushered us out into the hall and lead us up stairs not saying a word.
Once we got upstairs she led us to the end of the hall and opened two double doors, one on each side of the hall.
“Hannah this is your room”, she said pointing to the room on the left, “And Ben this is your room”, this time pointing to the room on the right.
Once I walked into my room I immediately feel in love with it. It was like it was my dream room. It had a big king sized bed with sunset blue sheets on it. The curtains were the same color blue with white cabinets to match. On one dresser there was a picture of Mom and Dad. Dad had his fangs showing and Mom had dark brown wings, like a hawk’s.
Then the thought hit me: why did I have white wings and Mom have brown ones? So I walked across the hall into Ben’s room with the picture to find him staring at the same exact picture also.
“Why are your wings different?” Ben asked at the same time I asked, “Why are Mom’s wings different?”
“I don’t know”, we both said at the same time again.
“Okay. We really need to stop doing that”, Ben said putting his copy of the picture back on his white dresser. His bed was a king size to with a dark blue bed spread to match with the dark blue curtains. His room was also slightly bigger.
Then Monica walked in and shut the door behind herself.
“You guys I have to tell you something very important. Now with out any distractions or problems”, she said with a hushed voice just loud enough for me to hear her.
“What?” Ben and I asked at the same time and then looked at each other and grunted.
“The reason your parents were staring at you two like that was because no one else in all of Galactia has the same colored wings. Or can change into that type of bat!” Monica said like if we didn’t know our lives would be at risk.
“What?...”, I asked, “How is that possible?”
“I don’t know but prophecy said someone would be able to save Galactia from a very long and hard war. And that it would be someone who could change into a black bat and have the wings of an angel. Two opposites who work as one!”
“WHAT!” Ben and I shouted not even noticing the coincidence.
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