I'm totally unsure of which version I prefer. I have two versions I want you guys to check out and let me know which one you like better and I'll continue with that version. Posting this one first and Version 2 tomorrow or so.
After a few months without hearing a single thing from Molly, Mark couldn't take it any longer. He had to take matters into his own hands for once.
Mark out of breath runs down the hallways and barges into Brilynne's class room. Every student in the room's face jerks towards the door in panick as does the teacher's. Everyone is confused as Mark tries to catch his breath to speak
"Daddy what are you doing here?"
He was still trying to catch his breath.
"Mark are you okay?" Miss O'Connor asks worriedly.
"I will be. I need to take Brilynne out of class for the rest of the day and tomorrow." he looks over at Brilynne "Come on baby. We gotta go. Pack your things."
Brilynne packed her things quickly and ran out of the class room and down the hall and out of the school with her dad.
"Daddy where are we going?"
"We're going on a roadtrip!"
"Are we going to Disney World?"
"Even better...we're going to see Molly." he said as they hopped in the car
"Do you love her daddy?"
"Yes princess. Is that alright?"
"Yes daddy! As long as it's okay that I love her too daddy. I miss her."
"I know baby. We're gonna get her back."
"Okay daddy I trust you. Just don't break her heart again." Brilynne said sadly and Mark's heart sank into his stomach.
"We'll have to see if she's take me back first baby. If she does than I promise I will never break her heart again."
"I love you daddy."
"I love you too princess." he as he kissed her forehead. They stopped on the highway for gas quickly as well as food and potty breaks then headed out on that long road to North Carolina.
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Molly was dancing on a table surrounded by guys when Mark, Brilynne and his roommates walked in to their apartment. Mark's heart exploded in that moment and made to turn around and walk out when Molly spun around and noticed him. For a split second she thought she was seeing things then she had no idea what had come over her when she blurted
"Baby!" she screeched drunkenly and bent over to push the guys apart and got off the table and ran to him. He was confused and she was drunk but she knew even though they broke up a couple of months ago, there had to be a reason he was here now
"Damn! She has a boyfriend too?!"
"What the fuck! This sucks!"
Mark heard the group of guys say and he smirked but got nervous when she came at him. He didn't know what to do or say but she came and grabbed his face and kissed his face and mouth sloppily. He'd never seen her drunk before. He was beyond blushing when she pulled back and saw Brilynne.
"Beeeeeeeee!!" she giggled crouching to pick her up and hug her hard. When she put her down she said "Whaddup small fry? I missed you very much."

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The Guy I Met At CVS
Teen FictionAs summer begins Molly is back home determined to have something meaningful happen to her this summer, whether she has to sit and wait for it to happen or she has to do it herself. Molly is a spunky young black girl who marches to the beat of her ow...