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Review done by: Leader_snoke
Book title: Feather flow: Moonrise angel book 1
Author: Lunaris_Pledge
Genre: Fantasy
Now, let's begin the review:
Cover: I actually really like your cover. And that says a lot! Because normally I don't like other people's covers unless it's a well known author. There is one thing I did not like, it's very minor. I didn't like the font. The font degrades your book and makes it look cheap (if that makes sense?) Other than that, I really like your cover. It pulls people in.
Summary/ Description: I liked your description, it really pulled me in to read the book. Although, I was disappointed once I started reading. The first chapter was good. But once I got to the second and third, I was kinda bored.
Grammar: Your grammar had very few errors. I was certainly impressed! There were a few misspelled words, but other than that I did not notice anything :)
Characters: All I can say is wow! Lets just say your characters were different! I am a huge fan of fantasy and your characters made me feel right at home!
Plot: Your plot was really interesting! I look forward to reading more of your book as soon as I have the time! I would go in there and edit some stuff, at first it felt like it was really different than anything I have ever read, but at parts it felt just, well plain.
NOTE: Your book was defiantly one of the most interesting books I have read. And I certainly enjoyed reading it. Keep writing :) you've got a knack for it! :))
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