Review:LOVE IS 2 Revealing Riley

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Reveiw done by; The_Last_Skittle
Author: sycastillo14
Title: LOVE IS 2 Revealing Riley
Cover: not available
Genre: Teen Fiction
Cover 5.5/10 The cover is not very eye catching, It is all black and white (I may love black and white but it does not catch someone's attention)
Description 10/10 It drew me in, and I am glad it did. this story made me cry at some points... Seriously, no lie at all.
Grammar and punctuation 9/10
There were a few errors that I found, I found an area where the sentence did not make any sense. but it is good anyhow.
now for something new to me
Character 7/10 First of all, three years ago I was 10. I was not that childish, calling my mum and da, mummy and daddy... I stopped calling them that at 8. that is all I have to say... but everything else was pretty much spot on.

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