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Who reviewed this book? That'd be me: mjfillet
Title: Nickles and Dimes
Author: TrulyRandom
My review format may be slightly different than the others...
But bare with me please I don't do number or letter grading...it feels too much like school. So I'll tell you what's great and what could use work okay? ^_^
Lets start with the cover: It needs work. It's decent, but it's not eye capturing. I suggest either browsing through the Multimedia club thingy for cover artists that suit your taste (they advertise everywhere) or search for cover books.
Summary/description: I liked it, and it made me want to choose and review this book :3 The format needs a little fixing, and it could be tweaked, but it was very interesting and straight forward.
Grammar: Excellent. I wasn't focusing too much on grammar so I can't say there were no mistakes, but there was nothing repeating or that stood out and irked me. You know what you're doing, so keep at it! o(≧▽≦)o
Characters: They seem interesting. You could get their personality through their actions and subtle things. ^_^
Plot: The plot is written well, but I feel like it's either rushed or missing something. From the three chapters I read, the scenes were well written, but it didn't have a gripping story plot. Nothing that necessarily said, "I have to read the next chapter!" I'm not saying you need cliff hangers, but something more than her daily routine. You touched upon her thoughts and emotions a lot which was great, and you had a nice mixture of action in there.
Note to add: My favorite part was in that cafe and the guy froze up when looking at her because she was pretty or captivating, literally I was like this guy>> σ(≧ε≦σ) ♡
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