This review is done by: Leader_snoke
Note: This review might contain some spoilers. Please do not read if you wish to read the book later on.
Book title: Thanksgiving weekend
Author: hoofprintson02
Genre: Western romance
Let's Begin!
Cover: Your cover gave a fallish feel to it, if that makes sense? I am very picky about covers so here's what I think: The cover itself is not very good quality. It looks very cheap and plain. The font is the same, it screams cheapness.
Summary/Description: I liked your description. It was very informative, but not too much.. basically it didn't give anything away!
Grammar: I suggest you go and edit the book because there were some mistakes that were grammatically incorrect. Misspelled words, commas used the wrong way,and sentences that ran together.
Characters: I liked how you described your characters in such a way that I felt like I knew them! So good job on the characters.
Plot: I've only read four chapters but I'm really liking the book. Your plot is very nice and I like the way I can hear the accents.
One thing I noticed: It says in your book that the drunk drivers car landed on Canley's shoulder, I have to say that simply doesn't make sense at all. The car can not land on her shoulder. I would change that as soon as possible because you will probably have readers that tell you the same exact thing
Overall: I loved reading your book! It was enjoyable and I felt right at home in the story. You are a good writer. I gave you suggestions so that maybe that can make your work just a little bit better!
•note: If I was harsh in anyway, I'm very sorry. But I have a tendency to be very blunt•
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