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Also, as I have stated, I am the most blunt person of this group. Please do not get offended by my bluntness.
Author: marmaladebreeze
Book title: 12 days before Christmas
Genre: Teen fiction
Cover: I suggest changing the cover because it gives sorta a kiddie feel. I really liked the one you had on there before you changed it. So I suggest changing it back to that one, or changing it all together.
Description: Your description gave the required details for the book, nothing more and nothing less. I like how you were straight to the point in the description!
Spelling and grammar: Now I don't like to be super blunt.. But your spelling and grammar, had several errors. I suggest you go back through your chapters and read them. That way you can know all of the mistakes you made. There's too many to point out here right now.
Note: I was not happy when I found out your third chapter had a cuss word in it. It's okay because maybe you didn't realize it had one, but when you request please be honest with us. We do not want to start an argument so please do not get offended by this.
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