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Author: Lunaris_Pledge
Book title: Feather Flow Deception and truth {Book 2}
Genre: Fantasy
Cover: 8/10
The cover is pretty but I think it would be better if it showed her wings.. I suggest either to look on Google or pintrest!
Description: 5/10
The description is well thought and you can understand what it's about.. The only thing I wasn't too keen on was the quotes from the book, it seems like a odd place to put them. Other than that it was good
Grammar: In the prologue you use the word Alpha way too much! And once I read the third chapter you also used sword like that. For example:
"He swung his sword at her and his sword barely missed her"
Instead of that, do this:
"He swung his sword at her, and it barely missed her"
Overall: You have a really interesting book going and I hope you continue this series!
Note: When I read through your book I noticed that you spaced out your lines, try to keep all the paragraphs together and that will improve your writing ;) - Black Widow
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