Let's get started. *laughs evily*
Review done by: The_Last_Skittle
Author: Beyond1star
Title: Survivor
Genre: werewolf
Now the main part!
Cover 6/10
It isn't very eye catching. It is black and white with the eyes green, and although the picture is awesome with the faces blurring together, but I just don't find it appealing.
Description 5/10
It wasn't really one of those books that draw you in, make you want to read it all night long, and cry when someone dies. It's a description that would make someone hesitate or just keep on scrolling, just like the cover. I recommend that you fix them both.
Grammatical and punctuation 8/10
I seen a few grammatical errors and punctuation, but it's okay.
Overall 6/10
It didn't really give off enough descriptions, like I don't know what they look like, or what the cell looked like. You gave them thoughts, and I like that. This just needs some work and time.
I only read three chapters, I may continue on my main account.
Your probably like 'Skittles you're so rude!', but I am just voicing my opinion; I have the right to do so. I hope you continue writing and improve it a bit more.
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