The Text

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I got into the car with my mum and Hannah. This one day I will never forget. I had all of my dreams come true today. I met One Direction, got Liam's number and I got to hug him. I was in heaven right now. 

Buzz

Buzz

My phone went off in my pocket. Who could that be? Did I some how give Liam my number? No, I never gave him my number so who could it be? I looked at my phone, I saw the caller I.D. I didn't regonize it at all. I opened up the text message it read.

I love you.

Who could that be? And why did they tell me they loved me? I texted back with this

Who is this and what reason would you have to tell me that? 

I know that sounded real rude, but I had no idea who it could've been and it was starting to freak me out. My phone went off again. I saw Hannah beside me, wondering who it was. I shrugged my shoulders because I had no idea. It was really starting to scare me.

This is Louis Tomlinson. The reason is because I actually do love you. Liam is going to kill me when he finds out about this because he feels the same way. I wanted to be the first to tell you. I  looked up your number, that;s why I have it. Please don't tell Liam about this. Promise me? x

I looked at my phone in shock. Louis Tomlinson just told me he loved me.

"MUM!!!!!!!!!" I screamed at her as we were still in the parking lot.

"What is it hun?" She asked. I still had the look of shock on my face. "Who is that?" She asked as she caught sight of what I was looking at.

"Louis just told me he loved me." I said and she started to laugh. Why was she laughing? Hannah just stared at my phone. This can't be happening.

"I told you so. It was always Louis." She said through her laughs.

"What are you talking about?" I asked her.

"He was the person that loved you the whole time. He stole your letters to Liam. He said that stuff about you. It was always him." She said and I started to realize she was right. It was Louis the whole time. I opened the text message back up. I reread it and thought long and hard about what to tell him. I decided on this:

Louis, it was always you wasn't it? You always loved me even before I started writing these letters. I came to that one live show before, but I never got to see it because I got sick and had to go back home. You saw me and helped me. I forgot about that day. I always thought it was Liam, but it was you. I like you, Louis. I love Liam though. I hope you know that and yes, I promise you I won't tell him. I think he already knows :) x

Hannah looked at the text I just sent him and let out a scream

"MAGGIE REMEMBERS!!!!" I hit her on the arm.

"Shut up!" I said back to her. I finally remembered, but mum wasn't there. It was just me and Hannah by ourselfs. Since my house is only 3 minutes away, we thought we could just walk and sneak in. I told her I was sick, but she didn't listen. I went anyways. I will or shouldn't have forgot about that. It was one disgusting memory I actually didn't want to remember.

"She remembers what?" Mum asked. I shot a dirty look to Han. She knows not to tell her. 

"Nothing." She said simply. Mum turned on the car and finally left the parking lot. My phone buzzed again. It said:

Yes it was Maggie. I'm glad you finally remembered that day. I know that you will always love Liam, but I just want you to always remember what happened that day. :) x

I won't forget again. I thought to myself. I hope I can love Louis like I love Liam, but I don't know if I can. He was a big help that day. I texted him back:

Louis, I will always. I like you. I miss you now I have to go. I will put your number in my phone. Bye love. :) x

Hannah tried to steal my phone to see what I said, but I hit her hand everytime she tried. 

We got back to my house. Apparently, Hannah is going to spend the night with me tonight. It didn't bother me at all. I want to call Liam and well, Hannah wants to talk to Harry too. I almost forgot that the boys were sick. I guess Louis wasn't as bad because he was texting me. I decided not to call Liam because he needs to help the boys a bit in their state.

"Maggie, when are you going to tell your mum what happened?" She said when we got into my room.

"She doesn't need to know." I said very quietly.

"She does, mags." She said more strenly.

"Han, you don't know my mum that well." I said more strenly. 

"Maybe I don't but you have to tell her. You was pretty sick." She said. I know I was, but I'm not now so how is that going to help anything now.

"Han let's talk about something esle. It's ironic, I didn't get to see that one because I was sick. Then tonight I couldn't see it because they were sick. Wow is all I gotta say to that." She started laughing, It was pretty funny to think about.

"I know right! It's soo weird." She said.

Buzz

Buzz

There goes my phone again. It reads:

From:Louis

Liam knows. I'm officially dead.

I started laughing. You should've deleted the messages smarite.

Louis, you are a dunice sometimes.

I started laughing harder at that. He needs to learn when not to have his phone out.

"Louis is so stupid." Hannah said

"I know right." I said.

This has been more of a weird day. Now Louis has my number. He told me he loved me. I remembered something from back in August and I have now two guys that love me.

Liam Payne

and

Louis Tomlinson

What am I going to do now? This is more work then I thought it was going to be.

How was this chapter? I loved writing this one. It was more on a personal level. I think so. 

What do yall think? Come on leave me some comments below :)

I love you guys :) Thank you making this story a success :) I never thought it would take off like this :)

There is more to come :) There may be a sequel to this after I get done :)

Oh, check out my new story More Payne (Liam Payne fan fiction) It's a bit different then I have ever wrote :)

Sorry for the long authors note :) It was important :)

~Athena Kiss~

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