21 - People using pictures for everything

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Caroling caroling now we go christmas bells are ringing

Fiona locked her apartment door.

Walking to the bathroom, she sat down at the vanity and put her makeup on

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Walking to the bathroom, she sat down at the vanity and put her makeup on.

                     (heres Fionas makeup 4 u guys)                                             

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                     (heres Fionas makeup 4 u guys)                                             

                                                                                       -time skip-

Fiona walked into the Starbucks down the corner.

Fiona walked into the Starbucks down the corner

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She got her favorite drink, a pink drink.

I realllyyy don't like it when people constantly use pictures

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I realllyyy don't like it when people constantly use pictures. There's nothing wrong with using 1 or 2, but it gets annoying when authors use them constantly. Y'know there's something called 'describing the scene' right? Even if you can't describe too well, you could at least try and learn from your mistakes.

How to avoid?: This one is pretty self-explanatory. Use words, not pictures.

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