Since only one person answered me by my wall, I'll ask again here
Should I completely rewrite under the sea or just edit it and switch some things around? Or both, cuz I have a rewrite idea but I also don't want to leave the other version behind
I have some problems with the first version like what is Jimin learning on land when they're far more superior than we are xD, I didn't show enough yoonmin, I did things too quickly with no buildup
So should I rewrite the whole story with a new plot, or fix this plot
Mind you I already have the new plot written down, I'd just need to start writing it
And please give me straight answers and no "whatever you want sweetie" because idk what I want and that's why I'm asking you xD
Tell me what you think so I can make a decision
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Under The Sea//Jikook [DISCONTINUED]
Fanfiction[DISCONTINUED] [REWRITE IS IN ANOTHER BOOK] Jimin is the Prince of one of the 5 mermaid kingdoms in the Yellow Sea who took a liking to land and doesn't want to return home to the ocean. Jungkook just wanted his childhood friend back, he didn't know...